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In a world full of magic and wonders how will our warrior develop over the course of his years. Will he be a hero? Will he be a menace to the people? Or will he decide to care for his family only? Join us on our tale about our hero from a different realm and how he grows to become the strongest in the world of magic.
[Tags]: Male MC, Harem(5 Max), Action, Slice of Life, Romance, Reincarnation, No System, Future R-18 (Maybe), Slow Progression with Meaning
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Good novel, I'm really excited to see another harry-potter novel i also hope that the author could keep the story as interesting as he does now, i heard that this novel is the first novel the author is writing. I really didn't expect that because the author has a very good story-line, the chapter updates is just perfect with quality over quantity. Something i like the most is that the novel length is approximately 2,500k to 3,500k. just discovered this novel, and cant wait for more chapters
A very interesting in-depth Harry Potter fanfic. I can't wait to read more from this author. 14000000000001400000000000140000000000014000000000001400000000000 The Harem God was here.
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Really interesting background setup and an intriguing plot for the MC insert. Also, I have always felt Luna was one of my favorite characters so I am glad to see this story giving her a happier life.
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I just started reading this and it is simply incredible, the plot of the story is unique and fascinating. I loved how he was reborn as Luna's twin and I really hope that they get together. It has a few spelling errors but your grammar is outstanding. Most fanfictions have terrible grammar which makes them difficult to read. I hope that you continue writing this and that you'll be able to finish it. There is a lot of good fanfiction that I have read that were never finished hopefully, you can finish it.
Really great so far, wish you well for putting some more chapters out. Interested how he is gonna get into Hogwarts with a sword, but.... also do some rituals before he reaches Hogwarts.
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good novel. please more chapters, and please dont do the harem very big like do it with two more girls or one. more chapters.more chapters.more chapters.more chapters.more chapters.more chapters.more chapters.more chapters.more chapters.more chapters.more chapters.more chapters.more chapters.more chapters.
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a good story one of the best i found about harry potter !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Very good overall, it's an interesting take on the lovegood family in the HP universe and silver does not seem out of place at all. (140 characters)(140 characters)(140 characters)(140 characters)(140 characters)(140 characters)
Good harry potter fanfic, the first chapter was👌🏾 your grammar is 5 star for sure and the telling of the ”story” is also done very good. As there aren't many chapters I could only Review the first two chap, I will come back another time to edit this review