/ Book&Literature / Harry Potter: The illegitimate child
摘要
As an illegitimate son of a pure-blood family, Solim's life was not easy when he was a child, but it didn't matter, Hogwarts was his destination.
It doesn't matter that Dumbledore, the old man with a white beard, is not as great and upright as he seems.
Well, Solim has a little Squib Sister - The only family he cares for and he wants to study and try to find a way to make her a Witch.
"I'm sorry Headmaster but I'm here to study, not to work with you."
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This is a translation of the fanfic with the same name.
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Hmm [img=faceslap] Nice start[img=recommend], looking forward to it. [img=update]👌👌[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
For the people - The story is really great, this is only the starting and maybe will change this review but till now MC is not stupid, talks and makes allies easily, the story only shows 1% of canon, and most of the time other things MC is doing, MC has a goal, disrupts the plot of the book. Each chapter is very long lol.
romance?.....................................................................................................................................
Oh, I know this one! I had read the MTL till ch 10 but stopped because of the confusing names and all, but you are doing a great job till now♥ The story really looks promising