4評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
romance?.....................................................................................................................................
Hmm [img=faceslap] Nice start[img=recommend], looking forward to it. [img=update]👌👌[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
For the people - The story is really great, this is only the starting and maybe will change this review but till now MC is not stupid, talks and makes allies easily, the story only shows 1% of canon, and most of the time other things MC is doing, MC has a goal, disrupts the plot of the book. Each chapter is very long lol.
Oh, I know this one! I had read the MTL till ch 10 but stopped because of the confusing names and all, but you are doing a great job till now♥ The story really looks promising
romance?.....................................................................................................................................
Hmm [img=faceslap] Nice start[img=recommend], looking forward to it. [img=update]👌👌[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
For the people - The story is really great, this is only the starting and maybe will change this review but till now MC is not stupid, talks and makes allies easily, the story only shows 1% of canon, and most of the time other things MC is doing, MC has a goal, disrupts the plot of the book. Each chapter is very long lol.
Oh, I know this one! I had read the MTL till ch 10 but stopped because of the confusing names and all, but you are doing a great job till now♥ The story really looks promising