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Follow Alvin's journey in the world of Harry Potter with a card drawing system.
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*This novel is not mine. It is obtained from a Chinese fan-fic platform.*
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Although this Fanfic have a bad rating, i still like it. I'm not a Chinese huh and this is not a bias decision. I just used to read Chinese fanfics before, and Chinese ff is the first ff that i read, so maybe because of that I'm quite tolerable with this. Enough of that, this ff have a Harem, and Hermione as one of the heroines, so plus points for me. I don't know about others huh, but i love Hermione and I'm not gonna change it. Each of us have their own likes and preferences, so no bashing please.
Once I actually read it thinking it's gonna be good ff but then I see like china and cho being mentioned a lot then I realize that it is a mtl so sorry bro just average for me
I literally felt like throwing up from the writing it also misses a lot of parts of what makes Harry potter Harry Potter and from what I heard the mc only talks to Chinese charecters and barely uses his system later and then there are the titles the white devil dumbldore just ruins the experince of reading a Harry Potter ff. 10/10 do not recommend
Sudden girlfriend without any build up. I like Cho for female lead but the author just suddenly make her fall in love without build ups or any development that could lead into that. Power scaling is too much and no development seen. There are also poor translations.
Just dont read... its google translate gone wrong... And even story itself got so many plot holes in first 2 chapters that u can count yourself to sleep...
is so baaaad.... It seems the author only has general knowledge of the universe. The translation is extremely bad and the main character's decisions have no logic
the idea is good, however the system barely appears and it has not much influence in the story. additionally, there are lot of Chinese culture influence. I understand if OC past life, even if he has live in England for eleven years, but some of the English born characters show also Chinese traits. about the story, this is more like life of slice kind of story. you should expect a lot of "dog's food" as Chinese people say and not much action or not much sense about the power of the OC. I am dropping.
Me aburrio muy rapido este fanfic. El prota esta muy roto y el autor se pasa todo el tiempo tirándose flores el mismo. El sistema aparece 3 veces en total de lo que va el fanfic.
where is the original site located so i can read ahead :) please post the original source [img=coins][img=exp][img=update][img=recommend][img=coins][img=exp][img=update][img=recommend][img=coins][img=exp][img=update][img=recommend][img=coins][img=exp][img=update][img=recommend][img=coins][img=exp][img=update][img=recommend][img=coins][img=exp][img=update][img=recommend]
It's Chinese....Yeh.. Translation is horrible.. Feels like I'm reading some cringe cultivation novel Read at your own risk ppl.. also the story developement is not good at all..
it feels extremely rushed and is also cliche Chinese storyline. with a snape lover the belives Lilly loves or had fellings for snape
Sudden girlfriend without any build up. It seems the author only has general knowledge of the universe. The mc only talks to Chinese charecters. There are also poor translations.
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The concept had good potential, and I liked how the novel developed, but the writing quality was still below par by my expectations.
Hp world + chinese words + chinese phrases + Mc Chinese + Mc is social communist + wuxia. 🤢 [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I just hope it's different from the hundreds of ffs that China has... At first I didn't notice that it was a Chinese ff, and I started reading it eagerly, only until for some reason he gets hooked on Cho and talks about British aesthetics for the role of her there are my average chinese author alarms going off, and then she comes out with the chinese food and there was when i noticed they don't interact with anyone other than a chinese pj (like cho), now i'll give her some chapters to get out of the typical Chinese development... For now only a 5/10 only for the expected Chinese author.