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摘要
After dying from drowning in a river, Liam found himself turned into a baby. Thinking 'What worse could happen now' He found himself abandoned in an orphanage.
"God, What sins are you punishing me for"
The sweet girl next door is Hermione!!!.
What did you say I got accepted into Hogwarts!!!!!
This new life doesn't seem so bad now.
Liam shouted, " Magic is magnificent!!, Magic is mysterious!!, Magic is miracle!!".
Author's words of wisdom: - The suspense is terrible. I hope it lasts.
When you will be half way through this book and come a to a plot twist at 1 am... you won't need sleep you will need answers.
please read at least 10 chapters before judging.
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The MC acts... average. It's like he's not a reincarnator but an OC. I get that the author wants to make him "human" meaning with flaws, but the way he's doing it is so bad. Don't get me wrong I like the plot but the dialogues, conversations, feels so programmed. It's okay tho since the author said that he's new. I just probably expected too much after reading "HP: A Magical Journey".
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In my OPINION the author tried to make the MC pure/dense but if you read carefully it looks like the MC has lowest iq possible . *SPOILERS AHEAD* The MC was a University student and has read Harry Potter even if he doesn't have dislike or bad of opinion of characters like dumbledore or snape he can atleast be cautious. Otherwise its an okay story and you can read it.
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could have been a great story. but the author has mistaken a single paragraph for a chapter leaving the word count and story development rather low
although it's not the one of the best Harry Potter Fanfics I've read but it had that potential. the main thing I don't like is that sometimes it feels like MC is not a reincarnated guy[img=faceslap]
1)Качество письма - 5. 2)Обновление стабильности - 5. 3)Развитие сюжета - 4. 4)Дизайн персонажа - 3. 5)фон мира - 4. 6)Общая оценка - 4. 1) Quality of writing - 5. 2) Stability update - 5. 3) Plot development - 4. 4) Character design - 3. 5) background of the world - 4. 6) Overall rating - 4.
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The Content is quite good and interesting.. There is a bit of suspense as well , I wish the update frequency was quicker............................................ .......................................... ..................................
more chapters plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plzplzplzplzpl, plz plz itss sooo goooodddd need moooreeeeeeeeeeee
I really like this so far and cant wait to see what happens down the line but ple dont have him and Hermione get together 😂 and i like the Little but of A serious tone you have a little more would hurt though at least for me but other than that i love it and hope you can post more often
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The character and plot seem needlessly complicated Like how he creates an elaborate plan to expose edward when he could have just told dumbledore or one of the other teachers and it just struck me as really stupid
it's very good story. One of the very few Harry Potter fics which follows completely different path. Also it's very good to see MC that has nothing to do with Harry's life and makes actual friends and has his own problems and adventure.
Truly have enjoyed reading this book its quite interesting and intriguing that it catches ur attention especially with who the OC/MC grandfather is that followed the path of darkness so to speak that Nicolas Flamel said and then mysterious organizations and "them" that Dumbledore and Snape were talking about the Wand that was made by Ollivander their family heirloom especially with how unique and powerful that it is that not even Voldemort was able to take control of the Wand and then the demon creature along with the voice inside Liam's head look forward to reading more of this cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on
I love hp FF so here's the longest name 😂😂(to random 😂😂) Zeus Wolfeschlegelsteinhausenbergerdorffwelchevoralternwarengewissenhaftschaferswessenschafewarenwohlgepflegeundsorgfaltigkeitbeschutzenvonangreifendurchihrraubgierigfeindewelchevoralternzwolftausendjahresvorandieerscheinenvanderersteerdemenschderraumschiffgebrauchlichtalsseinursprungvonkraftgestartseinlangefahrthinzwischensternartigraumaufdersuchenachdiesternwelchegehabtbewohnbarplanetenkreisedrehensichundwohinderneurassevonverstandigmenschlichkeitkonntefortpflanzenundsicherfreuenanlebenslanglichfreudeundruhemitnichteinfurchtvorangreifenvonandererintelligentgeschopfsvonhinzwischensternartigraum
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1)Качество письма - 5. 2)Обновление стабильности - 5. 3)Развитие сюжета - 4. 4)Дизайн персонажа - 2 5)фон мира - 3. 6)Общая оценка - 4. 1) Quality of writing - 5. 2) Stability update - 5. 3) Plot development - 3. 4) Character design - 2 5) background of the world - 3. 6) Overall rating - 4.
Мне очень понравилось произведение хоть и читаю с авто переводчиком , от человека из снг одобряю;3 надеюсь автор будет выпускать побольше глав
All the other authors on this platform are shameless. They review their own novel with 5 stars. But i am not shameless. Still I am also reviewing my novel But not because I am shameless.
No clue why this story isn't popular but i think it's because slow chapter release but i still like the story and how the main character was born.