/ Book&Literature / Harry Potter- My Own Way as a Malfoy
摘要
Is this still a Magic Spell? Dumbledore looked at the Lumos charm that was shot out with dazzling light. A simple Agumentai Charm caused a 20 feet long long dragon made out of water. A repair charm turned back time.
The Protagonist- This is just who I am.
This story is just for fun and not intended to copy anyone's work. The Cover Picture isn't mine.
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a translation? because the spelling sucks ............................................................................................................
I recommend to have someone that actually know the English language to point out your errors and spelling mistakes. Lot's of grammatical errors in the text as well as using wrong terms for different things, example: calling the first years "freshmen". The story seems like it might be decent if not for the glaring errors making it unreadable. Dropped.
bad grammar, cant read .........................................................................................................................
He started out as a good MC then he was dumbed down as soon as he went to school so he can fit into Harry’s little gang to tell the truth if I wanted to reread Harry Potter I would just do so there is really nothing new to this fanfic just HP plus one but hey the system seemed interesting in the beginning so read if yo don’ t good luck 👍 👍**********************££**********************************
If this work is translation ... can anyone please point out details about original .......................................................
Its was good before he went to hovard.he is a genius who awaken his magic in his childhood but he didnot learn magic.ten in hovard suddenly hr is not talented to learn magic.now he is more like a spectator on harry potter movies.
Easy, clear. The ''power" of the mc (tween of Drago)'s to switch a magic with another one of anime similar but more powerful. That strange, it's so simple but way to efficace. Hope u don't wast that with a harem and continue to do a good fanfic. If u want to breath and drop ur head on a good HP fanfic read that.