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Guardian of the Pacific: The Incredible Adventures of the Giant Turtle
4.53 (65 評分)
摘要
The boy woke up as a giant turtle in the Pacific Rim.
This is a story about a guy with a good moral compass. If you want to read how MC destroys cities and sinks ships, then this fanfic is not for you.
There will be no magical transformation back into a human.
This is my first fanfic. English is not my native language, so I used a translator.
In the first chapters, I used GPT for some paragraphs of text, but the result is not satisfactory. Then everything is manual work.
I do not own the rights to the universe and characters in this story.
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If you are expecting something like Godzilla vs Ghedora where they fought without care, then this is not for you. this is about an impulsive and emotional Tortolized human fighting kaiju to protects human. basically a journey of humanities guard dog, or in this case guard tortoise.
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I'm loving that start so far! a very promising startup. I'm not going to suggest anything as not to derail you from you're vision, but I am very satisfied!
It’s a pretty decent read. The main flaw and something the author should consider is keeping religion and IRL politics out of fiction. I’ll be dropping for that reason, but don’t let my review stop you from giving this fanfic a chance. As I said, it’s not a bad read. 👍
For lovers of the "non-human reincarnation" or quite realistic genre, I do not recommend reading this, the MC has the typical hero syndrome, I stopped reading when he handed over the corpse and another chapter where he "scared" criminals, I can't believe he talks about feel the body's institute guide him to the radiation but if he leaves his food?, literally not even the vast majority of humans today will share their food and humans in primitive environments much less!, after 2 fights to the death, he weakens and gives his prey? (ah, but if it feels like the institute to look for radiation later is very stupid) I feel this story is too unnatural.
Many readers have problems because MC is a good guy(Which is clearly mentioned in the tags) but personally I like it because of that. When humans exploded bombs on him he was angry and wanted to attack but held himself back because he knows that one decision does not reflect the whole of humanity(Practical I would say). Not like some crazy MC where if you hurt me I will kill everyone even if it is not their fault.
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Writing: idk? It’s good but sorta felt artificial idk how to describe it Update: pretty good Story: above average Character: 5/5 for me so far Background: (it’s a fic) Alright, so this is a fairly good read, definitely better than a lot of other fics that can be found, if only author removes the IRL politics bit it’d be better, people don’t want to read about others’ political opinions and stuff
The story is great everyone should read this and the author should not give up This has potential. Please give it a try
I'll give the story a chance even though I'm bummed that it doesn't have herem or romance. Although I think it would be impossible to get a girl the size of the mc. From what I read, I criticize them. The story is good.I give it 5 stars for the effort of the author. I know it's not easy to write stories.
Say Author-san, if this fanfic ever finishes, could you do a Sea-King MC in One Piece, like say Jörmungandr?
The writing quality is great, the updating stability is great one chapter a day is good and I do hope the author is having enough rest, story development is amazing, character design is good lack of images and description but still good enough, world background is amazing so many twist and betrayals from stupid goverment officials, and also the mc is probably the most realistic human to monster that calls himself normal cause he is actually normal and not a pycho killing children because of the so called "animal instinct". Or a genius with photographic memory that knows everything from his past life to use to his to advantage. This novel is one of the few that I actually enjoy enough to rate, and I would like to recomend it to other people.
Its really good, very entertaining for a fan of Pacific Rim. No need for a complex review, just read the book already.
bit of a rough start, but this is an amazing read with actually character growth and learning. I want more
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no me gusto paranada su personalidad principal mente,su cobardia, ademas de que tiene el cuepo gigante literalmente solo caminar los podria matar es demasiado para mi
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Not bad but not for me. i hate when mc's reincarnates as a monster and instantly goes full hero-ish type for absolutely no reason. mc could protect his own territory, or try to make a trade, maybe smt like volibear or ornn? but just going saving everything as a kaiju is just... boring, cause i'm expecting to see a kaiju as mc, and not a human. -1 star for grammar, -1 for the mc.
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