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Bjorn Ironside was a King among men it has been told that it was impossible to kill him. But on his final day Bjorn Ironside Unites all of Norway, Bjorn gets shot with six arrows everyone thinks he’s dead, But he slowly lifts his sword one last time, When he does this the Kings, Queens, Jarl and Earls of Norway answered the summons of Bjorn Ironside and came to save there Country for he was truly the King of all Norway. No one else could have untied all these people. The Valkyries summon you home Bjorn Ironside. Bjorn draws his final breath and closes his eyes when he opens them he sees the gates to Valhalla he starts to walk towards them but once he reaches the gates they won’t open then Bjorn hears a voice, “Bjorn Ironside Your journey does not end here.” Once he hears this voice his vision goes black again, when he opens his eyes he is surrounded by snow……..
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The novel will be based off The Vikings from The series Vikings. Yes i know a lot of what the show portrayed as facts were actually false but I still wanna do it:)
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The story has potential.I personally think that becoming vassal of the starks would kill the mood.Although odin telling him to take the crown when ready gives me hope. Also when odin tells that there are vikings in GOT I thought it would be ironborn or wildling. I would have liked to see mc start as a wildling and make his way up.
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the way characters interact with each other is not good...very awkward ! the Mc supposed to be Bjorn but he is very arrogant ..and he is gonna be a vassal for the starks but his plan is yo be kong of the whole North so we have a arrogant Mc who is oathbreaker ! the author doesn't even explain how lyarra stark is alive when she supposed to die when benjen is born...yea anyway this work need much work but the author has not experience !
Just this cover image, made me want to read this fanfic.