摘要
Second attempt at a fanfic.
The usual die and then reincarnated story, read and find out more.
All Game of Thrones and other characters belong to their respective authors and only oc's are my own.
Cover pic was found on the internet, if it belongs to you and you want it down send a message or something and I'll remove it.
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Why write something so complicated. If you had wanted him to be in essos, just had him exile for the incident where he killed kingsguard. It was all too cringey to read every bad thing happen to him as if everyone was idiot. There has never been in history of got where 1st born was declared unfit to rule on basis of appearance alone
Stop trying to make fanfic, this is your second and for me you are the ultimate image of failure and disappointment.
Too much cringe, too much forced plot, If you want to read this you better shut down your brain. .
The MC is a Cuckold, don't get me wrong, not in the sexual sense, if he were cuckold only sexually it would be acceptable, but he is a cuckold in everything, he dominates 3 free cities, has armies and is good in battle, but is humiliated for the family, he could just take power and it would end, total garbage of protagonist, besides the author didn't research about the succession laws, the eldest son is always the heir
If possible, I’d give no stars at all, the MC is a retard, and everything he does, is forced, not only following canon, but doing it in the most infuriating way possible.
First of all the mc is literally the strongest person in westeros and he controls the economy and has the magic to make anyone loyal to him. But for some reason he wants to stick to canon meaning he is always bowing down to joffery even when he gets mocked and theatened and gets hated on by his family constantly and he does nothing, he has no pride at all even though he controls everything. I think the author is a masochist.
Alright the MC is a awesome character hes strong smart and a good learder. His powers also fit well with the world. Then he gets repeatedly walk on by his family and acts like a total wus. Also also with everthing he does the GOT story never changes. All in all a great character in a bad story.
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The MC is extremely pathetic despite having a lot of powerful abilities. The author seems to want to follow canon despite it not making sense with the MC's power. The way he tries to keep the plot on canon track is too forced and cringy. The author will show the MC acting cool or giving some wise dialogue but the minute his parents who hate him command something he becomes a loyal dog. He even let's Joffrey insult him in front of everyone. All of this would have been OK if he was an OC with no meta knowledge but he does which makes his behavior and decisions very bad.
Man, I've never said anything like this before you really should stop writing!!! [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Wow I just read 16 chapters straight and this is garbage the MC is reincarnated first born son with wishes and lets his family walk all over him. The story forces itself to stick to cannon even with a hilariously overpowered MC who is to much of a cuck to change any thing. Believe the other reviews, I did not, this is trash.
Idiotic opening ruins immersion for the story 1 of the Reasons game of thrones succeeded so well was the relatability of characters due to them being yes highly trained yet still regular humans for the most part If mc was reincarnated without such differences for example Benifit 1 retains past life knowledge Benifit 2 learns skills etc easier Benifit 3 allowed some knowledge of 1 field of study upon reincarnation And that was it your story would be way better
Garbage Mc is a dog to the throne . ... ... .. . .. even though he has basically the strongest army . . . .... . . . . . .. . . . . ..
The mc is just sickening to read about. The quality only keeps dropping with every chapter uploaded by the author. It seems like he has not read any of the comments. There’s simply no point in reading this anymore.
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