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3.15

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Grandsage_0257

this, in all honesty, was just very disappointing. The Mc is just complete garbage because of the fact that no matter how someone humiliates him, he will still try to appease them. I very rarely say that fan fics are trash, but this is just trash and painful to read . The author could've, at the very least, let the Mc start trading with the seven kingdoms after he became king or at least secured alliances with the land he traded with after going to essos.

2mth
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covestar

The most pointless novel fanfic of all time.. author most get of on mc being berated and getting dragged around the mud psychologically.. I mean, what was the reason for his first born royalty status.. even if his mother hates him, why does his father hate him as well or treat him badly.. I mean, the mc is strong enough and with his wishes, he could have taken over all the kingdoms or he could’ve been the prince after he came back from his first exile at 16. I can understand y the author dropped this fanfic.. it was simply never going anywhere.

10mth
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Saiyan_Of_God

There are no other words because the Mc has The Power to do anything and is ruined by his own stupidity. He could have just renounce his name and looked for Denaerys and have his OWN DRAGON because of his lineage instead he is Nerfed. There's nothing else to say.This says it all!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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1yr
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Exelia

Your writing is good. You know how to write. Sadly that's it. You went out of canon only to fallback into canon. Created a strong MC, only to drag his character to the mud. You had him having his hands on everyone's pockets to do with as he wish only to have him bent over the will of those who wish him ill. A potential story, destroyed by a BS mc. There are only so much your readers can endure. And an MC that bad can only last so far.

1yr
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Israel_7720

terrible i una decepción el personaje es un estúpido

1yr
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Godkinhdhfrhdgg

The mc was just a slave the whole time no matter how strong he got and was in the end he was just an obedient slave

1yr
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DaoistSyNSDC

Don't know why some people don't like this fanfic but for me it is also in my top 15 list, and I really like the story, just want to beg the author to not make this a harem 😭😖 sometimes harem ruin a good story, and I really can't imagine the mc to have many wives, and it's also okay if the mc is single, I'm not fun of romance but if you deliver it well I think it will be good!!! But nonetheless, waiting for your update author....🤗

2yr
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aragis

I hate passive mc. they literally wait and wait and wait... until author decide the change the story. people dont wait for years after years after so hard working just for what? same flies in story keep steal everything you build I dont think so. no one accept that kind the abuse from anyone specially people like joffrey-cersei-little finger...

2yr
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Rocio_Machado

Very good story. I found it very original. In addition to the protagonist who is a very good antihero. I hope that in the future I will be surprised with more good chapters. Skills and such are well built.

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Absolute_Power05

to tell you the truth it's good but when it reached chapter 14+ the story is going downhill because of the development of the story and his submissive to his family even though he hate them I just don't get it he is already the strongest and have the ability to slaughter any house why be make your self like a fool out of your self

2yr
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LukeMorningStar

♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️

2yr
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RetroShredder

Its terrifying how bad it is, the chapter with boons was enough to be honest

2yr
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Queen_Karina

First of all the mc is literally the strongest person in westeros and he controls the economy and has the magic to make anyone loyal to him. But for some reason he wants to stick to canon meaning he is always bowing down to joffery even when he gets mocked and theatened and gets hated on by his family constantly and he does nothing, he has no pride at all even though he controls everything. I think the author is a masochist.

2yr
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0Darknorth0

Me gusta como va, aunque halla algunas cosas forzadas. Me rei mucho de las reseñas negativas sobre la desesperación, si hay reyes y emperadores que han matado a su hijo simplemente por qué no se parecen a ellos o que no le gusta su actitud. 😂😂😂😂😂

2yr
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Azazel_70

Garbage Mc is a dog to the throne . ... ... .. . .. even though he has basically the strongest army . . . .... . . . . . .. . . . . ..

2yr
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Will_Caruso

YES!!!!!!!!!! Harém: Daenerys Targaryen, Sansa Stark, Margaery Tyrell, Arianne Martell. HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM

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Medalha

exp.........................................................................................................................................

2yr
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Phoenix1998

This story was so good. But now so dissapointing so far. The mc doesn't do anything new. Does not change. I feel like me and many others will probably read two to three chapters and drop it after. Please author make it exciting again.

2yr
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Jayxdaf

Love the story!

2yr
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YoDaddy

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2yr
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pafro
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Wow I just read 16 chapters straight and this is garbage the MC is reincarnated first born son with wishes and lets his family walk all over him. The story forces itself to stick to cannon even with a hilariously overpowered MC who is to much of a cuck to change any thing. Believe the other reviews, I did not, this is trash.

2yr
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UndeadProgenitor

The mc is just sickening to read about. The quality only keeps dropping with every chapter uploaded by the author. It seems like he has not read any of the comments. There’s simply no point in reading this anymore.

2yr
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kingbastard1999

The MC is a Cuckold, don't get me wrong, not in the sexual sense, if he were cuckold only sexually it would be acceptable, but he is a cuckold in everything, he dominates 3 free cities, has armies and is good in battle, but is humiliated for the family, he could just take power and it would end, total garbage of protagonist, besides the author didn't research about the succession laws, the eldest son is always the heir

2yr
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Doist0000077785

bro I can only say that the fan fic is great with good story but man just kill his mother and other he hate. He has so much power and his own he can kill or assassinate them anytime he want just and plzz release chapters more often.

2yr
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AshburnDz

Man, I've never said anything like this before you really should stop writing!!! [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

2yr
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ForTheEmperor

Alright the MC is a awesome character hes strong smart and a good learder. His powers also fit well with the world. Then he gets repeatedly walk on by his family and acts like a total wus. Also also with everthing he does the GOT story never changes. All in all a great character in a bad story.

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2yr
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Cardinal_Harb

If possible, I’d give no stars at all, the MC is a retard, and everything he does, is forced, not only following canon, but doing it in the most infuriating way possible.

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2yr
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Grandsage_0257

this, in all honesty, was just very disappointing. The Mc is just complete garbage because of the fact that no matter how someone humiliates him, he will still try to appease them. I very rarely say that fan fics are trash, but this is just trash and painful to read . The author could've, at the very least, let the Mc start trading with the seven kingdoms after he became king or at least secured alliances with the land he traded with after going to essos.

2mth
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covestar

The most pointless novel fanfic of all time.. author most get of on mc being berated and getting dragged around the mud psychologically.. I mean, what was the reason for his first born royalty status.. even if his mother hates him, why does his father hate him as well or treat him badly.. I mean, the mc is strong enough and with his wishes, he could have taken over all the kingdoms or he could’ve been the prince after he came back from his first exile at 16. I can understand y the author dropped this fanfic.. it was simply never going anywhere.

10mth
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Saiyan_Of_God

There are no other words because the Mc has The Power to do anything and is ruined by his own stupidity. He could have just renounce his name and looked for Denaerys and have his OWN DRAGON because of his lineage instead he is Nerfed. There's nothing else to say.This says it all!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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1yr
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Exelia

Your writing is good. You know how to write. Sadly that's it. You went out of canon only to fallback into canon. Created a strong MC, only to drag his character to the mud. You had him having his hands on everyone's pockets to do with as he wish only to have him bent over the will of those who wish him ill. A potential story, destroyed by a BS mc. There are only so much your readers can endure. And an MC that bad can only last so far.

1yr
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Israel_7720

terrible i una decepción el personaje es un estúpido

1yr
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Godkinhdhfrhdgg

The mc was just a slave the whole time no matter how strong he got and was in the end he was just an obedient slave

1yr
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DaoistSyNSDC

Don't know why some people don't like this fanfic but for me it is also in my top 15 list, and I really like the story, just want to beg the author to not make this a harem 😭😖 sometimes harem ruin a good story, and I really can't imagine the mc to have many wives, and it's also okay if the mc is single, I'm not fun of romance but if you deliver it well I think it will be good!!! But nonetheless, waiting for your update author....🤗

2yr
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aragis

I hate passive mc. they literally wait and wait and wait... until author decide the change the story. people dont wait for years after years after so hard working just for what? same flies in story keep steal everything you build I dont think so. no one accept that kind the abuse from anyone specially people like joffrey-cersei-little finger...

2yr
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Rocio_Machado

Very good story. I found it very original. In addition to the protagonist who is a very good antihero. I hope that in the future I will be surprised with more good chapters. Skills and such are well built.

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2yr
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Absolute_Power05

to tell you the truth it's good but when it reached chapter 14+ the story is going downhill because of the development of the story and his submissive to his family even though he hate them I just don't get it he is already the strongest and have the ability to slaughter any house why be make your self like a fool out of your self

2yr
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LukeMorningStar

♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️

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RetroShredder

Its terrifying how bad it is, the chapter with boons was enough to be honest

2yr
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Queen_Karina

First of all the mc is literally the strongest person in westeros and he controls the economy and has the magic to make anyone loyal to him. But for some reason he wants to stick to canon meaning he is always bowing down to joffery even when he gets mocked and theatened and gets hated on by his family constantly and he does nothing, he has no pride at all even though he controls everything. I think the author is a masochist.

2yr
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0Darknorth0

Me gusta como va, aunque halla algunas cosas forzadas. Me rei mucho de las reseñas negativas sobre la desesperación, si hay reyes y emperadores que han matado a su hijo simplemente por qué no se parecen a ellos o que no le gusta su actitud. 😂😂😂😂😂

2yr
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Azazel_70

Garbage Mc is a dog to the throne . ... ... .. . .. even though he has basically the strongest army . . . .... . . . . . .. . . . . ..

2yr
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Will_Caruso

YES!!!!!!!!!! Harém: Daenerys Targaryen, Sansa Stark, Margaery Tyrell, Arianne Martell. HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM

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Medalha

exp.........................................................................................................................................

2yr
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Phoenix1998

This story was so good. But now so dissapointing so far. The mc doesn't do anything new. Does not change. I feel like me and many others will probably read two to three chapters and drop it after. Please author make it exciting again.

2yr
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Jayxdaf

Love the story!

2yr
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YoDaddy

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pafro
LV 4 Badge

Wow I just read 16 chapters straight and this is garbage the MC is reincarnated first born son with wishes and lets his family walk all over him. The story forces itself to stick to cannon even with a hilariously overpowered MC who is to much of a cuck to change any thing. Believe the other reviews, I did not, this is trash.

2yr
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UndeadProgenitor

The mc is just sickening to read about. The quality only keeps dropping with every chapter uploaded by the author. It seems like he has not read any of the comments. There’s simply no point in reading this anymore.

2yr
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kingbastard1999

The MC is a Cuckold, don't get me wrong, not in the sexual sense, if he were cuckold only sexually it would be acceptable, but he is a cuckold in everything, he dominates 3 free cities, has armies and is good in battle, but is humiliated for the family, he could just take power and it would end, total garbage of protagonist, besides the author didn't research about the succession laws, the eldest son is always the heir

2yr
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Doist0000077785

bro I can only say that the fan fic is great with good story but man just kill his mother and other he hate. He has so much power and his own he can kill or assassinate them anytime he want just and plzz release chapters more often.

2yr
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AshburnDz

Man, I've never said anything like this before you really should stop writing!!! [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

2yr
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ForTheEmperor

Alright the MC is a awesome character hes strong smart and a good learder. His powers also fit well with the world. Then he gets repeatedly walk on by his family and acts like a total wus. Also also with everthing he does the GOT story never changes. All in all a great character in a bad story.

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2yr
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Cardinal_Harb

If possible, I’d give no stars at all, the MC is a retard, and everything he does, is forced, not only following canon, but doing it in the most infuriating way possible.

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