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摘要
James, a relatively strong member of his guild, was still treated like a bottom feeder, mostly sent out for useless missions. Having wasted his prime years and all of his talent by doing these arons he was getting fed up, but he could do nothing about it, that is until he found a Godly relic that gave him the power to return before Gods Domain released, giving him a chance to do it all over and grabbing everything for himself.
This stories power system and world is based on RSSG, I do not own that novel nor do I have anything to do with the author, I just think its a really good system.
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So far its great how the RSSG world is used in your story. I’m looking forward to seeing how this story develops as there is a huge potential! Please don’t drop it!!!!!
Really loving the story so far! The pacing is a bit fast but I think that’s one of the things I like about it lol. I’m curious to see if you are going to bring in any characters from the original story as well. (hope that you do!) Thank you for the good read and I hope it continues! 10/10
interesting story, so far the development of story is good hope the next chap will not drop.. keep going
I think the story is cool and the development is cool, I hope the author keeps updating. ......................................................
I wished this hadn't entered hiatus or had been dropped, but oh well. Amazing story, overall.
Very good story, the pace is somehow better than RSSG (although they haven't found a real challenge yet), the characters are nice, I felt that the author got too attached to the original work which brings this work closer to a Fanfic than an Original Work, I expected to see more differentiation in terms of items and future directions than can happen but the author stopped writing (I hope he returns from the bottom of my heart)
I will review if Author comes back because this FanFic is fire,absolutely beautiful except some little, tiny errors in words but that is it. It is beautifully done fast-pace,"spoiler" but I am waiting for his mana or divine body and ?Evolution? or similar word, read it and you will understand. I have not found other mistakes. AUTHOR, COME BACK, I WANT MOAARRR OF YOUR DRUGS!
Eu acho que o autor esquceu da obra. Triste. ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Autor here, I don't think I can fairly rate my novel so ill just tell you a little about it. it is an MMORPG novel set in the world of RSSG, I wrote this because of my love for said novel. The novel might be a little confusing if you haven't read RSSG but I'm pretty sure it is still readable. hope you guys enjoy.