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His legendary class is The Husband Of Deathwill Sisters!
While other players went through common quests to get their classes, Alex started by getting a legendary class: Husband Of Deathwill Sisters! He got three beautiful wives from the start and the legendary castle!
What would his girlfriend and friends say about this once he reveals his class to them?
And what about Deathwill Sisters? What is their plight, and why would they suddenly get a husband?
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I was reading it and noticed that he used words to tell a story. just wow, didn't know that could be done. props to the author for this amazing discovery and use of the English language.
Grammar and word choice is meh, much room for improvement. There are also some redundant words here and there. Not many descriptive words, some even repeat often. Other than that, it's pretty interesting. Only plot hole so far seems to be when the mc did 10 million damage to an enemy a few hours after logging into the game. Granted, some skills and techniques were used, but no where grand or powerful enough to do 10 mill to an enemy with 1500 hp.
mate everything was fine and dandy. the story was good the character was good the background is kinda mysterious. the update stability so far is nice but there are some problems that author really needs to think about. first of all what is this book about. it's game so you need to make it clear the data about the enemyy when they fight the reward that he gets,the quest that he takes, etc but instead this novel is like an urban slice of life romance type paced story or even an Japanese high school type story which is inconsistent from my point which makes it barely readable like a game novel should be and another point is the exaggeration of expression. for eg. if I say he smiled,".........." which makes sense but when you put he widely smiled,".........." then that makes it extremely exaggerated for me. if it's once or twice it's fine but if it's after every single time that he smiles you put widely after it then it makes it unpalatable for me. overall everything is extremely good but author should definitely focus on what he is writing about if he wants to make the novel a top class which the reader want to read again and again. thank you your sincere reader
You know him you love him, back with another amazing tale… Sixth. Seriously though why are you still reading this review, go and read the book.
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Okay, my review could be called unfair as I only read 4 chapters. But it just doesn't make sense. He picks a sword and jump to the skeletons in his first time in a VRG, he also explains he wasn't afraid of them because he has Battle Mode, like if his real life also had skills and fight in the streets to learn his skills(nothing of that was explained, nor how the Battle mode). Also, the no fear made no sense. Then in the same 1.- day and just after like 2 hours he already has perfect swordmanship(he is the successor of the style) to do perfect moves, fight a captain skeleton and do 999,999 dmg in one atk. I just don't get it, nor the life and past of our MC or the fact that he do like 2 months of game play in a normal rpg in less than 3 hours and learning to use a sword perfectly without any experience. I really have no idea how people give perfect scores and reviews here where perfection doesn't even exist.
This is probably in the top 3 most enjoyable harem novels I’ve read. The main selling point being the charcters actually feel real. Each FMC has personaility, motivation, goals and feelings which creates realistic feeling interactions, all of which are enjoyable. The action is good, the romance is great, the story overall is fantastic. Stop reading other harem trash where girls have 2 brain cells and tap into this marvelous story.
One of the best Harem novels I've read yet, where the character doesn't mindlessly increase his harem. Perfect balance between romance and action. Highly recommend.
this is a very good story, different from what I usually find and it also makes the reader get involved with the characters. ...unfortunately the website is having a problem, whenever i unlock a chapter the words become unreadable, and this is happening with every story i unlock. normally i would try to read this story on another website but i couldn't find it anywhere else so i can only leave this story in the library until this is fixed. ... I deviated from the assessment. Author, you deserve 5 stars.
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hello dear author I will give my little review. 1. I liked this story a lot, the romantic development of each character that I have been able to observe is beautiful and it is not immediate, it takes its time. 2. The development of the world in general up to the point where I'm going, it's made me feel quite comfortable. 3. This would be my conclusion and well, to all future readers I seriously recommend this novel, for my part I can only say that I cannot finish it despite the fact that it is already finished, it remains in chapter 108 and only with those 108 chapters can I say that it is a great story, can't wait to finish it.
I havent started reading yet, so gotta ask: 1) Is this story sth like MC getting a class in a VR game or the real world itself is like an RPG? 2) The upload rate shows 16 chs/week. Is this gonna stay constant? Or at least, will the updates be regular?
Interesting premise, and a pretty cool 'legendary class'. I feel like I'm reading a romance-type novel that has been put into a video-game shell. Kind of like "Pride and prejudice and zombies". Not that I'm complaining, I like it so far and I'm only 2 chapters in :) Looking forward to seeing how the story progresses. (Also we are around the same ranking - my book is 'My Necromancer Class', so I thought I'd check out your book out and I'm enjoying it, keep it up!)
It’s only the start but I’ve been hooked. The author has given a nice fresh take on the genre that works really well. The characters are independent and unique, and so far the novel seems well thought out. I still don’t have a clue what the overarching purpose of the story is yet, but I’m enjoying it this far. (Chap 30)
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hello dear author I will give my little review. 1. I liked this story a lot, the romantic development of each character that I have been able to observe is beautiful and it is not immediate, it takes its time.
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this was an amazing read from beginning to end. I fully enjoyed the different personalities among everyone in the story.
This book is so much better than the other books you wrote. I don’t think you should let the criticism get to you but use it as a tool to learn and not drop this novel from it like the last novel.