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Games of a vengeful mafia queen

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作者: Lo_rezi00

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After being treated unfairly and killed Bella is given a second chance to life to take her revenge and save the world with the only condition that she does fall in love.

This gets spiced up when she crosses part with her mutual enemy Leon Copeland and they are compared to get married to one another by their family
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[Bella what are you doing? I thought I make the rules clear?] She heard butterfly said and quickly shut her eyes trying to comprehend her emotions

"You did but I'm just human, and my baby needs his dad," she said coldly and picked up a glass of wine.
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"What the fuck has come over you?" Leon screamed seeing his wife pointing a gun at him

"Nothing.. it's simple I want you out of my way"

"Your way?What on earth are you speaking about.." he asked perplexed as he could feel his life draining bit by bit out of him

"I want to be the queen" Bella replied coldly

"But you are already one"

"I want to be the one and only Mafia ruler and I don't need anyone's support especially not that of a motherf**ker like you"

"So you want to kill me? Tell me what would you tell our kids and family? I was never in your way and I wouldn't" Leon said hoping he would calm her, he was still unaware of what in actual fact came over his once loving and sweet wife...

Will she be able to keep to this one rule and save the world or would fall in love and ruin everything?

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    bubblesicedtea

    She's literally The It Girl. I'm her number one fan and I will be taking classes from her on how to girlboss to the sun and back.

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    DARK_DEKU

    Nice and beautiful and it is like my first book

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    Leo2410

    That was really well written by you. I am looking forward to the next chapter. Even i write. Do check it out its's called My Husband Is The Demon King

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    CADMUS
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    I pity Bella....she went through so much only to get betrayed by her own sister (I wanted to strangle that devil incarnate) XD We're only 5 chapters in, but the story's looking good so far. The writing needs some fixes, especially on the typos and grammar but it's nothing too extreme. You can still understand the story clearly 👍 Looking forward to more updates! 😄

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    Mystic_Chronicler

    This novel packs a serious punch. Bella's out for revenge, and she means business. The whole marriage twist? Wild. I can't wait to see if she plays by the rules or falls for the unexpected. 📚🔥

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    Jake_Rich

    love revenge reincarnation books and let me just say this is one of the best ones I've read.and the one condition to fall in love is a nice touch.

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    Okwuma

    I’m loving this I remember reading the vampire system It almost seemed like it but it isn’t the vampire system. I’m fascinated and really intrigued. Added to my library already 😉💞💞

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    alu_sachi

    This is truly fun to read. I am deeply in love with this book in that I can say that I have become addicted already. This!I can't even believe it.

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    Adam_Aksara

    "The Regal Underworld" masterfully combines the worlds of royalty and mafia in a thrilling, contemporary narrative. The heroine queen-turned-mafia-don brilliantly leads the story through a vividly depicted urban backdrop. Despite minor character depth issues, the plot's riveting momentum is captivating. A must-read, unique crime novel that's deserving of a full five-star rating.

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    empressblackrose09

    A unique plot that you have. A mafia story follows the MC Bella who went through a lot and was given a second chance to live and also, with the help of the revenge system at her back, it makes more interesting. Not just that, she is really capable of her own. Keep writing! ^_^

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    Samantha_R_Samuel

    You've done an outstanding job, author! Your story is exceptional, with carefully crafted characters and a captivating world. Keep up the great work. I'm thoroughly enjoying your story and eagerly anticipating more!

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    zowji
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    The protagonist, Bella, is portrayed as a tragic figure who has endured immense suffering in her life. The author effectively captures her emotional turmoil and desperation to escape her circumstances. The introduction of Ella as her half-sister and antagonist adds complexity to the plot, revealing a twisted and sinister dynamic between the two characters. The story explores the complexities of love and abuse, shedding light on the destructive aspects of relationships. The author portrays the protagonist's conflicting emotions, torn between fear and a desire for love and understanding from the person who has hurt her. The plot incorporates elements of mystery, as Ella reveals her intentions and motivations, leading to a shocking revelation about Bella's mother's death. This revelation adds depth to the story and sets the stage for potential revenge and resolution in future chapters. The use of descriptive language enhances the emotional impact of the novel and allows the readers to empathize with Bella's pain and desperation. effectively creates a sense of suspense and leaves readers wanting to know more about the characters' fates and the possible outcome of the story. It raises questions about the possibilities of rebirth and the potential for redemption and closure. Overall, the chapter is well-written and engages readers with its intense emotions and intriguing storyline.

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    BL_freak378

    I like ypur story.Well, who hates mafia stories where we have a queen FL?!Of course I love this.But I wanted to tell this specially.You have sais temporery synopsis. But...it still need to be perfect, isn't it?I saw quesntions marks are nowhere to see. That sometimes annoyes the readers who care about grammer and perfect looking novel. They read it first so it must be perfect.I am not a peofessional author. I also do a lot of mistakes. But this is something I got infirmed when i was a new author..Thr story doing good.That's why i like it.Author, i have one morr question.I am not fluent with english so i must say this first.But i am a little confused with purpose of your title's" ' "Game's or Games of the mafia queen?Author have all thr rights to wrote as you want. But I just confused and need an answer from the author...🤗Kewp going author... Please do synopsis I am aure it will attract more readers to read this story.Thank you for writing this. 🙏

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    ToshiroOne

    you can almost never go wrong with a good old revenge story first chapter was done superb. i felt something reading the opening chapter. i felt so bad for Bella.

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    ForerunnerOfSky

    Nice, I like revenge novels also the sister is so unlikable, Fl is pretty interesting. The writing is fresh and quite good, the dialogue is a bit weak at times but overall a pretty good novel

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    TsukasaFrier

    I felt the plot is a bit heavy for me from the beginning of your story but it's still interesting enough for me to keep reading. With only five chapters so far, I think there is a potential for your work. Keep it up!

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    redlady

    I am a little disappointed that is a system novel since I am not a fan .The writing is fine.You can still improve the plot with more descriptions .Hope that the book becomes a bop since it has potential ! Keep up ! Love the FL ! and the cover .

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    WandererMonk

    truly an interesting concept for a novel.a nicely done revenge drama is all we crave at the end of the day and I hope this turns out to be that one

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