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Westeros is a land where intrigue, conspiracy and gold rule. A land where everyone has to look twice to avoid being stabbed in the back. A land that never expected one "insignificant" event - the arrival of a Pseudo-Servant capable of single-handedly destroying its foundations. With the knowledge of the modern world and the Servant's abilities, what changes will he make? And is Westeros ready for those very changes?
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Story seems ok but hard to read. Its very confusing when someone is talking. If the author stopped using - for speaking the story would improve and be readable. It get worse when someone stutters and its full of - - - - - Every country use "speaking" and 'thinking' in writing. Why some people on webnovel use - for speech i have no clue. Its not something you learn in school.
1° Don't let it fall, this story has a lot, A LOT of potential. 2° Try to maintain the MC's individuality as a normal person, but without eliminating Solomon's traits. 3° Increase the number of chapters by 10 per week. 7 of which are daily and another 3 according to goals for comments, reviews and Power Stones. 4° I haven't paid attention until now, but if you don't have a Patreon or other form of sponsorship, I strongly recommend that you start finding out about all these details, literally all the details about it. You can earn a good amount of money this way.
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honestly disappointing, the author sticks too much to canon and there is no real progress, the decisions made by the author are questionable and I have no idea where this is going. If you want to read something that sticks to the canon, you better read the original work.
A story with good ideas, but extremely much useless filler. Instead of advancing something, every time a chapter is uploaded we only see two words from our protagonist and then leave it in nothing. Trying to lengthen the plot uselessly. I'm tired.
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honestly it was good in the start but now it's a chore to read through and not exciting it fell off in the later part where the story just lagged so much .
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one of the best GOT fanfic ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Very good fanfiction W author for picking Solomon as mc Plz don’t drop this fic I’m begging 🥺 🙏🏼 First fic I’ve read that used king Solomon as a mc he’s always been my favourite fate character since the Solomon fgo movie Honestly so happy for it because every fate transmigrated mc is always artoria, Shirou or Merlin I don’t think I’ve seen another fic with someone else besides them
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No hablo ingles y leo esto traducido mediante google pero senti la necesidad de dejar una reseña sobre esta obra. Es increible, tiene una calidad agradable de leer y la escritura al menos en mi idioma es fluida e inmersiva, la historia avanza a buen ritmo y la constucción de personajes me parece bien encaminada. Sin duda esta obra se ha vuelto una de mis favoritas de leer, espero con ansias su continuación.
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Keep up the novel—it's one of my favorites so far. But please, do not mess it up for us readers. I also hope you enjoy writing this novel. ___________________
Bad Grammar + Patreon detected = opinion rejected.