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摘要
Percy Arius never thought that he would be reincarnated. Truck-sama hit him one day and then BAM, he was vaulted into another world.
This is a story about a marine who stumbled upon the most evil devil fruit and his path to getting to the top of the World Government.
First fanfic, let me know what you think!!!
*Disclaimer: I don't own any of the IP for One Piece. All credit goes to Oda-sama.
Neither do I own the front cover design.
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Im in chapter 18 and its ok but great not that good enough though. Too much repetitive time skip training then fighting enemy rookie mistake cause hes to arrogant. The fight scenes is too bland and souless. Hes training his body then when coming to fights hes just absored the many the fights are so boring make a fight that he didnt use df to fight what to point on training haki six navy styles if ur not gonna use it. Every chapter its like 3 months later like cmon tell me what did he improve did he improve his haki or what. I cant say if the MC is strong or weak at all (maybe he strong cause of the df). Well this my opinion i dont about the others i tried understand u at first cause ur new to writing but the fights is not improving at all. Sorry bro if ur gonna mad but thats my honest opinion.
揭示劇透
Hello everyone, author here letting you know that this is my first work and I am taking this step by step. This story will probably be on the longer side seeing as it takes a while to go from the bottom to the top in the world of one piece. Have fun with it. pieinskie
At first it was good, then he started posting nonsense bruh. Ruined it. Yvfrffffftghbbbbbhhhhhgfftttgggfttgftgffftfffttgfffgffgggfggggggggggg
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One star for thinking your reader are stupid. You are posting chapters from completely different unrelated novel randomly again and again, I think you wanted us to give you one start. So here I am fulfilling your wish.
u kill your own fanfic story bro. i dont know why u did it but immm sad to let it go now. gbye percy gdbye onepiece fanfiction arghhhhhhhhhhjj
aside from updating stability everything is bad, like the others say his an idiot even upto chapter 38. everytime he first fight he will become an idiot and be arrogant its like he didn't learned a thing from his past fight
Might change depending if the One Piece FF story actually continues and not some other story preview being posted making the whole readers hate it to the bone (author..you know that's the worse type of advertising your new work, by doing a preview of it on this Fanfic...they'll only hate it more, you can let them know about it but making a chapter not related to this FF story x3...that'll make them to not reader it anymore). Anyway will take it off my library and might not see it ever again by then, unless it pops up who knows, meh.
was really good until author decided to just abruptly use his current book to advertise his new one by putting 4 chapters of a new book with no context in the middle of this one adios.
Very good novel ... until chap 71 when he started posting something completely different! This is no longer the novel I liked and you destroyed the whole story AUTHOR!
A well-honed story that proves that you can find some good story on this site. The author did not make a system or harem so go for it guys, You won't regret it
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was really good until author decided to just abruptly use his current book to advertise his new one by putting 4 chapters of a new book with no context in the middle of this one adios.
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Too many character are ooc....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Not sure what all the flack on the Series is. It's really well written and the grammar speaks for itself. If you can get past time skips you'll love the series, personally I feel like the time skips are warranted as they can further along towards the canon.
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It’s little details that kill this fanfic, it starts small and then you start skipping fights cause each one is just pull guy to arm and stay still, then you start skipping arcs cause the mc will reflect after a fight, choose a course of action so something doesn’t happen again and then not do it, people in the comments are making jokes that the df is consuming his memories cause by chapter 15 he isn’t any more knowledgeable about the future than a normal person