摘要
Fear... that is the exact emotion Javier is feeling right now.
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It's early, but it has a solid start, a slightly fast pace, the writing is good and the idea is great, as it's a football work it has my full support and reading time, I hope for more chapters.
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I love the fact that it's a sports novel and I like the development and where the story is going. please keep on updating
Hello, I'm starting this story cause I dound it fun, so if you like it please send your review and let suggestions in the comments sections, your comments are always a motivation!