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"Shit! He died again."
A boy threw his sword the moment he landed on the ground. He used his levitating magic to pick up a dead body and carry it in his arms.
"My tan skin is now even darker than yours." he commented as he compared his dark complexion to the pale, lifeless body on his arms. He looked at a corpse as if it was not new for him to see that person lifeless, but it doesn’t mean it’s not painful to see his brother like this.
"It’s not a good time to die, Kuya."
The boy softly talked to the lifeless body as he looked up at the blue sky. His long silver-blond hair swayed with the wind as he flew through the sky, ascending slowly without end.
"The weather is too good for us to die."
It was a bright and sunny morning. White, fluffy clouds drifted across the sky, and so did his mind.
The boy’s purple eyes have turned darker the more he stares at his dead brother’s pink hair, stained with blood. He had been trying to make his brother’s life better in his every regression, but the more he tried, the earlier his brother died.
Originally, his brother died at fifty, but now in his ninetieth try, his brother died too early, at fifteen years old. It made him wonder if his power to return in time would really help his brother to experience a good and peaceful life, which his brother had never experienced. Or if it was just a power to mess everything up and make his brother’s life miserable.
“What did I miss this time? What more should I do?”
The boy grumbled while he gripped tighter on his brother’s body. It’s tiring, especially because he keeps returning back in time nineteen times in less than a century. He fought a lot of higher beings that humans could never surpass, but he somewhat did.
For his brother, he could face dragons, gods, beasts, and any kind of dangerous being. He becomes stronger and greater than any human. But why does he keep failing?
The boy just let out a sigh before he sped up, ascending to the sky, only focusing on his direction toward the sun.
“Let’s die again and try for the twentieth time. I will never give up.”
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The eyes and interest of the higher gods are focused on the fragile-looking child whom the firstborn son of the Marquis wished to divert.
Ernesto Oliva is doing his best to save his friend from the bored and conceited gods that have made their lives very twisted.
He returned back to the past multiple times with one goal: to make his friend's life more fulfilling.
He does, however, end up dealing with a variety of beings, including Deities , Dragons, Demons, Giants, and other mysterious beings
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Cover illustrated by: Aerinmaers
What to see here: Fight against gods and other races
Powers used: Magic, Divine, Aura
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I've read until the 50+ chapters and it keep me on the beat, after the explaining phase on early chapters the rest run smoothly, making more each chapters interesting and exciting 💯 This is what I felt after reading until Chapter 56: ✍Writing quality: The writing quality is good. No glaring grammatical errors or typos. Its too few if it does have any mistakes. ⏰Updating stability: the author updates one chapter daily ❤ 🎠Story development: the story is optimally paced. The two MCs are still kids but very OP. the story revolves around their brotherhood.... which I really like. I like it when stories don't include romance or anything alike. Action and adventure are great here. 🌏World Background: At first i thought that the world here would be simple and straight but its not. There's vast number of powers and races involved in this story but it won't give you confusion or information overload. d author explains well the complexity of its world. 💁♀️Character Design: I love the way author created the averaging 14 years old kids here. i love their mischievousness and sudden coldness when in times of battle and they are too adorable in happy times. 👏in short, this work is a gem! 💎 💎 💎
The start is good, easy to imagine. The writing quality is decent. The world scene is subtly presented. The work has potential. This is interesting. I dont have any negative reviews with the story yet. Keep up the good work. :)
the kind of adventure i am searching 4!! give this novel a chance! i vouch for this! der are two ML and i am loving both! the two is pretty unique
Very interesting story. The place and situation is clearly described. While reading, I keep on asking my self "what is happening?" and "waaaa." It keeps me curious.
Reading the story is enjoyable and fun. The chapters are crafted to perfection. The author's descriptive skills really put him inside the novel. All I can say is that this novel is a masterpiece waiting for tremendous success. So, I'm going to give the work five stars!
Don't stop writing, you can do it. Don't stop expressing, or you'll dull the skill. Don't stop improving, writer fever makes us ill. Don't stop having fun, story must be told and seen.
HIGHLY RECOMMENDED!!! d writing quality is gud & story development is well planned! I thirst for more each time I finish one....the author did a good job at describing each scenarios, specially the fighting scenes. I luv this! keep writing please.
All i can say after reading less than a hundred chaps: > great action/fighting > I thought its bro m but its not > giants are OP > Wondering what's the capacity of MC's eye to store more people XD
Wow! this is a great book. I found myself fully immersed in this story,I hardly read stories about magic and supernatural beings but this story had me hooked up. Kudos to the writer,I hope you continue your daily update 👏 👍 😀 👌
i love reading about royals , dragons , and divine powers. this novel suit well my taste and i love the pace. i really cant wait for the mc to grow into young adults 🥰
I'm not yet done with all chapters but please do not stop releasing chapters. I can read all the chapters very fast. 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
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The story flows very nice and clear! 😳 It kept me looking forward what will happen next! 🥰 Many Characters with remarkable personalities. 😳😳😳😳😳😳😳🥰🥰🥰
So far so good. This is mainly a thank you for your help on critizing my book. Keep up the good work, I'm cheering on you............[img=recommend]
i love what Ive read. the writing style made it so easy to understand the thrilling book. I always read romance fantasy but still even though this work doesn't have romance i am still hooked to this as the action/fighting is not boring to read, the conflicts made me want to read more of more chapters to feed my curiosity.
would really love to see where this novel is headed, ... I thought it was only about brothers trying to protect each other but nah! the action and twisted characters is best![img=recommend]
Amazing writing style. This right here is pro level writing, I’m speachless. There are little to no mistakes, it’s smooth and addictive, there was nothing what would disturb me while I was trying to focus on the story. It’s easy to imagine the action and enviroment
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