摘要
Jonah Serene is a normal Highschooler until his Dad gets into trouble. he knows that his dad is a scientist but, he didn't know that his dad has invented a dangerous item called 'STR CHIP' which allows a person who put this chip into his brain to be able to see a.... 'SYSTEM'?! using this, he wants to take revenge for his father who got killed by an unknown organisation.
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- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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Great job, bro! Reminds me of Solo Leveling's early training days, but with some cool twists. Nice work!
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Well I think the story line is compelling to say the least but the actual implementation could be better