/ Anime & Comics / Fate Black Hound
摘要
A normal guy who finds himself involved with the Moonlit world through tragedy and will grow stronger so he doesn't lose anything else again
*Strong MC
*Alternate Universe
*Other Character from other Franchise may appear
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榜單 
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6評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
-------------------I loved the story and the content.I hope you continue to write.I hope more and regular chapter will be uploaded---------------------
Good story.................... Good story.................... Good story................... Good story.................... Good story....................
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This fanfic is indeed interesting but the plot felt rushed, not to mention the numerous grammatical errors that constantly appeared in each chapter. The characters seems more like puppets than humans and the world background and character design weren't portrayed properly. Despite its faults, this fanfic is enjoyable to read and so I hope the author improve his writing skills and creativity to further make this fanfic more enjoyable and interesting in the future.