摘要
What if in the era where awakener hunt in the dungeon, the weakest awakener suddenly gain an ability as a Dungeon-Master?
A story about Ray, an orphan who strived in the era of awakening to help his orphanage.
In this era of awakening, humanity had gained the power to fight against numerous monsters and dungeons that suddenly appeared in the world.
Ray, our protagonist, suddenly gains the power of a dungeon master. However, without him knowing, the system has a special plan for him.
Follow his journey to make the strongest farm inside the dungeon and gaining beautiful women along the way!
The Netori and harem part will be on the later chapter, about 20 or later, and the Netori will come slowly not like my other story. So please stay tuned ^_^
Additional tag: action, rudeyoungmaster, no netorare, mature woman, No R-18, evolution, chickens, money-grubbing protagonist, dense protagonist, love interest fall in love first, beautiful female lead, rich office ladies, netori specialist.
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The world background and power system is nothing new but it's good enough. the problem is mc is a naive hypocrite, the type i hate the most. You know it's really ridiculous how he stop killing the wolves simple because he see the leader have a kid, and even kill the other enemy beast to protect the wolves simple because of this like the other beast dont have kid too. the fighting scenes are to bad too, and if author wanted to make this more of a farm nobel he should set the tone in the prologue this way even if the future fight scenes are trash not many people will care. For now my review is this,but I will continue with this novel in my library so when I forget about this fic content I can do.e back to read and see if author raised the quality at that time I will decide if I change my rating
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I had expected something good after author's last novel 'stealing heroine' one but this novel was a dissapointment i won't say anything about bad grammar but novel was full of lines trying to evoke a comedic atmosphere though it wasn't able to do it. and there are other things but i ain't gonna type anymore
A nice concept about farming. Hope to see the dungeon developed like PvZ. Until ch 19, there was still not much farming, but really like how author start the story [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Great and funny story There are farming stories there are dungeon master stories but this 2 in 1 package is what we need and deserve Do keep it up and do continue to update chapters regularly !!!
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I do love dungeon master novels and am happy you chose the genre that said either people are stupid or reading the wrong novel cause this doesnt even deserve 1 star. Mc is naive, extremely stupid to the point its cringe, and a massive hypocrite. Could barely go past chapter 3. 1. How has he never injured himself in the cave hes visited for years. 2. His love for an orphanage that took him in because its the literal job of the orphanage is cringe and to the point of fanatic that its unrealistic, sure maybe they were super nice but its their job. ok sure this isnt that bad but its annoying and cringe as heck to see him beg for some money and cry like a baby cause he apparently "needs to support his orphanage" which is literally government funded and he should be paying for food and rent which is a much better excuse cause thats not how a normal person would react or pay their debt its stupid. 3. Grammar is eh 4. Mc is hypocrite, kills wolfs, sees wolf leader has kid, so kills their enemies to protect wolf leader. why? because he has a kid?!?! One, the wolf leader and you were enemies until the second you saw they had a kid and the enemies you kill have kids also you oaf and you have no relation to either party, completely forced by author. 5. I hate harems, but i wont let that affect my review because thats a category not a writing flaw. However why do you people need to ruin novels with dungeon masters and recruiting so much, if you want a harem thats fine, but not almost every single monster recruited needs to be a girl for the sake of harem, throw some guys in that arent antagonists or extras. For those who love harems, thats your choice but i will say its better to not put a harem in a novel as a majority of the webnovel readerbase hates anything harem related and most of those who read harems still read books without harems so if you want more readers dont do harem or little sisters. Little sisters makes 90% of readers drop a novel just seeing any words that state mc has a little sister those that stay just hope she dies so they can read in peace. 6. theres more but im too lazy.
We need talking dragon, We need talking dragon, We need talking dragon, We need talking dragon, We need talking dragon, We need talking dragon, We need talking dragon 😆😆😆😆
only read about 24 chapters so far as of this review but idk man I've thought about dropping this story a few times now, story itself is pretty good, nothing too amazing but a good read with deferent pacing. My real problem with it is that yes it has the stupid obvious plot armor that we all have come to expect from the novels on this site but what's really getting to me is that not only does author introduce language specific terms from a handful of languages like chaebol (Korean) and nii (Japanese) among a few others, grammar is just as all over the place. wish author would just stick to one or two languages and focus on Grammer, I'm gonna be surprised if I make it to ch.100 lol My advice to author really is to reduce the amount of languages and focus on Grammer
I really liked this story. It draws you in as you read it. The flow of the story is very nice. And the storytelling is very clean. Congratulations to the author, this story made me laugh and kept me reading non-stop. It was never boring and it was enjoyable. It was a pretty good story. Congratulations again
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This story has really good story line and I love the idea about a farming dungeon. I have been waiting a long time for a new chapter is this book done or just on hiatus?
the story concept is interresting, the world around it could use some more work, the romance ... are man really this dense? or did i just oversee the dense protadonist tag? the romance also makes me feel like the mc is somehow gay or stuck at the age of 10 mentally. even the children have more EQ then him. just looking at his dungeon name. how can he not relayse till now what a morningwood is?? leaves me with the question: what did he do at school, because in todays society even they know. sadly the only thing keeping me going for now was the interesting farming concept. to the autor, don't let my critice put you down. i belive with more work you will surly get better over time. just use the readers view to better yourself, every start is hard. but also do not allow everything we write to you, its your story and your idea. put warning in the prologe this way no one can complaine to you later for ignoring them. best wishes and continue writing ps english is not my native languagr so please excuse the mistakes. thanks
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2 problems; MC and author combine 3 languages to write the story. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
I very much disliked this but only because I dislike cheating and harem. I am very faithful and prefer a single partner. The reason I tried this out, is because the app recommended this to me so I am hoping that writing a review will let the app understand that I don't actually like this. If you like this novel, I can only be happy for you. Finding something you like is precious and I in no way want to make you feel like this novel is straight up bad as my view is subjective. To sum it up, I did not enjoy this personally and I wish you all the best!
La calidad de escritura es buena. El comienzo y el concepto fue interesante. Lamentablemente, el mc y el desarrollo de la historia lo arruinan.
Writing quality is good. The start and concept was interesting. sadly the mc and the story developement ruins it. Overfriendly i have to pay back social debts kind of mc. Add to that bad battles. Story might be interesting for people with a lighter and younger taste or for children