摘要
The Story Of a Person Who Become Zero to Hero From Not Possessing a Single Power to The Most Powerful person.
This is Story of Max Ramsay. Who Works in a Restaurant, Living in Apartment and Enjoying an Ordinary Life.
His Dream is To Become an Solider Like the Person He Admire The Most, But Life is not gonna be That Easy.......
-- 收到的禮物 
-- 推薦票
榜單 
-- 推薦票 你也許也喜歡
3評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
與他人分享您的想法
寫檢討
LV 11 ![Badge]()
I like the cover, however the synopsis can be better. The idea is great, but I know author can do better. Keep up the good work author! :):)
The way it is written is very superficial and cringe. There are things that are cliché. I had a hard time reading it. Maybe it's your first time as a writer, but you can improve 👍