摘要
"Well, if God didn't give me what I desire, I will snatch it alone."
Arth, the world of Magic and Technology, elements became substantial for humanity to be on par with other races. Some said only a few chosen ones would wield the element until now.
To learn the element, Varis Hakonen broke sacred rules and ended up with the rarest elements with a strange system. Extraordinary power came with tremendous responsibility. He must assemble every element master and seal the rift, the crack on a dimension that allows Wildering to wreak havoc on the world.
Little did he know, a mysterious group watched his every action with a hidden agenda.
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Good opening. It gave me the vibe of Dune. It intrigued me, seriously. But, it is more about the Elf girl.Perhaps the next chapter would be focussed on Varis? Keep the spirit up!
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make me curious what would happend to mc in the future. i'll do collection for now.
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