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"This is the perfect blend of the two most dangerous creatures that have ever walked the earth. We call it the Indoraptor.", spoke the man known as Gunnar Eversol who was trying to sell the first Indoraptor in a auction. There plans were however foiled.
The Lockwood Manor was then overrun by the Indoraptor who had escaped and was relentlessly killing everything that he could get his claws on. A fight soon broke out between the Indoraptor and a velociraptor known as Blue.
Owen, Claire, and Maisie were in the fight of their lives, but in the end Blue knocked the Indoraptor into the manor where the Indoraptor was then impaled by a triceratops skull.
Dr.Wu was taken away and many others fled while the dinosaurs ran freely into the world of humans.
Sometime later, Dr.Wu decided to make another Indoraptor for reasons concerning money. Though, he couldn't get the DNA to make the Indoraptor controllable he decided to change the code. Instead of making another male Indoraptor, he made a female with greater differences than the first.
As Dr.Wu works on his money situation, his very creation is watching him from the shadows.
One of her caretakers from when she was young had named the Indoraptor 'Sable', for her colors were almost pitch black but that changed once she grew. Sable soon escaped her confinement and not wanting to risk the same thing happening again like the first did Dr.Wu decide to tranquilize her.
Sable was then placed into a heavy facility where she will be monitored 24/7.
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Very good in terms of quality and word count. Overall interesting and hopes to see more of this. In terms of writing quality, I see no problem in grammar or spelling. In story development, not much I can say about as it has just been 1 chapter. Character design is pretty decent and I see no reason to make qualms over it. Updating stability is unknown for now. And finally, world background Likewise I don't have much info as this like I said recently started but based on how the author write, it is likely to be very good. I see potential in this and have high expectations for this to succeed. Have a pleasant time whoever reads this.