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Everything is dead yet i am still here. i wish i could go back and fix everything.
Issei Hyoudou in his dying breath was sent back in time everything had began.
WARNING: This is Alternate universe and may contain few changes.
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I expected more out of a person who went back in time like seriously and he is to emotional and unstable.
The personality of the character seems very unstable or forced throughout the chapters for someone who lived 100,000 years like the events, it feels as if the author will lack motivation or originality, all the things that the author adds are in the 99% of the other high school dxd ff.
It's a change. This seems really good. I dont usually think much of fan fics since they usually go downhill after 20-30 chapters but this one has alot of potential. If you could turn this into a complete story it would be awesome. Also dont drop pls, fanfics dropping at 16 chapters is just very sad.
it's good, one of the better dxd fics Ive read a few grammar mistakes but which fanfic doesnt have any of those? I suggest giving it a read,
It is a great idea that the author has, only that it is very used. The personality of the character seems very unstable or forced throughout the chapters for someone who lived 100,000 years like the scenes and events, although it is an au the author is guided in the original and that is wrong, it should create a story without worry or be guided by the canon
Honestly the fic is great. People are complaining that he is unstable but what would u expect from someone who has lived that long and was despairing. No one would act all alpha the moment they go back in time, the mc has to develop and that is what the author is trying to do (it seems)
Issei **** lol[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
this story is very good and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards, so please keep up the good work ..
"I need to protect" "I need to protect" "I need to protect" "I need to protect" "I need to protect" "I need to protect" "I need to protect" P. S. Unique premise??? Look, I am not frequently visiting Ff. Net. But this is as much unique as premise of noble devil son, that was shunned down and unloved by his parents.
If you want to read a fresh new dd fanfic then this is for you with a large harem. Writing qualify is a little low however you would be able to understand everything.
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this story is very good and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards, so please keep up the good work ..
Its a good novel hope for more future updates and you continuing this❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Let's start with the best part, Update stability. Considering we have a daily update of 2 chapters, There should be no protest on this part. Story development can be considered as good enough? While Character design and World background more or less DXD with some crossover. Writing quality is truly a major turn-off for this Fanfic. I won't claim that I have mastery over English grammar, but even for my standard, this writing quality needs great improvement pronto.
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not gonna lie the whole novel it's kinda cringe. issei is always going on and on about how he'll fix everything and protect everyone. despite living for such a long amount of time he still doesn't feel that different tbh there's no maturity or intelligence.