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Hey guys, I'm here with a new story, or technically this isn't a new story, as this is a re-write of High School DxD: The Runaway Gremory!
This story will be split into chapters , like the actual DxD light novel . We got that? Good. The starting chapters will be the main character (Kenji Gremory) and his life with his family before he (clue's in the title) runs away (OMGMEGASPOILERZAMIRITEM8).
Anything in this fanfiction that you recognise doesn't belong to me.
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The story started well, but then when GG developed, everything went wrong somehow, he inherited so much power, but at the age of 16 he was only able to do what to do and bite the hand of a bastard. MAKE THE MAIN CHARACTER AND NOW THE DESIRE TO READ DISAPPEARS BECAUSE OF HOW WEAK THE MAIN CHARACTER IS. I am writing through a translator, so there may be some mistakes, this is my subjective opinion.
The stupidest main character I have seen until now, is just an idiot who does not want to take any responsibility at all, he even thinks about suicide so as not to get married, In the end the main character is just a clown.🤡🤡🤡
This.. it could have been good but every character is so out of character that even the excuse "but AU/but devils" just makes me cringe. The author misses the mark at what makes dxd decent, it's a horrendous to read trough pieced together fanfic that tries to portray the mc as the wronged so much that every character thats not the mc is made to behave like some 80's movie highschool bully times 10. - Onto the mc, whats there to say but his abhorrent obsession with guns and roses. Thats it. Thats the mc. A selfcentered guns and roses obsessed fool that is oh so wronged by his surroundings. Self-inserts on wattpad have more depth than that. - The story progresses worse than a "betrayed and bullied self-insert" fanfic on wattpad itself. Do we have growth? no. Do we have any character that behaves as they should/would? Besides Venelana and ajuka? No, every character tries to depict such a ooc "loving family on the outside but evil and abusive on the inside" persona that makes issei and his 2 croonies look like absolute saints.
Stealing is bad, buddy. This work is already published on FanFiction. High School DxD: The Runaway Gremory (Discontinued). By: W.Alderson21.
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I read the story before he's just copy and pasting everything a book from what i believe is a book from Wattpad but I could be wrong if someone could please comment the name of the original author so I can reread the book
Never read the story but felt like it needed one more 1 star review. Have a nice day
It’s shit, bad grammar and the protagonist is the most immature character I’ve seen in a while
really bad. like real bad. cringe so much. also transgendered vali (and peobably issei) show that there is little thoughts and effort was put on this fic. why? just for the sake of incresiing a hole selection? eventho there is alrey tons of holes alrdy?
it's an interestingly story that's for sure but I do hope to see the mc acting his age instead of acting out but keep up the good work
This novel is pretty shit so far. This is literally the worst MC I've ever seen, he's such a overdramatic little shit. What was the author thinking when he wrote this character. Even if he improves and gets character development, there was no need to make him THAT bad.