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The MC is the most pompous whiny ass crybaby I have ever seen. I genuinely wish that the MC succeeded in offing himself. All the romance just seems forced as all hell. The writing quality itself is ok but the story decisions are just infuriating. TLDR: Extremely unlikable MC with forced romance.
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it's an interestingly story that's for sure but I do hope to see the mc acting his age instead of acting out but keep up the good work
The story started well, but then when GG developed, everything went wrong somehow, he inherited so much power, but at the age of 16 he was only able to do what to do and bite the hand of a bastard. MAKE THE MAIN CHARACTER AND NOW THE DESIRE TO READ DISAPPEARS BECAUSE OF HOW WEAK THE MAIN CHARACTER IS. I am writing through a translator, so there may be some mistakes, this is my subjective opinion.
The stupidest main character I have seen until now, is just an idiot who does not want to take any responsibility at all, he even thinks about suicide so as not to get married, In the end the main character is just a clown.🤡🤡🤡
This novel is pretty shit so far. This is literally the worst MC I've ever seen, he's such a overdramatic little shit. What was the author thinking when he wrote this character. Even if he improves and gets character development, there was no need to make him THAT bad.
Overall, mc is nothing more than a whining, baby bitch. Even worse than rias original character.
The MC is the most pompous whiny ass crybaby I have ever seen. I genuinely wish that the MC succeeded in offing himself. All the romance just seems forced as all hell. The writing quality itself is ok but the story decisions are just infuriating. TLDR: Extremely unlikable MC with forced romance.
揭示劇透 it's an interestingly story that's for sure but I do hope to see the mc acting his age instead of acting out but keep up the good work
The story started well, but then when GG developed, everything went wrong somehow, he inherited so much power, but at the age of 16 he was only able to do what to do and bite the hand of a bastard. MAKE THE MAIN CHARACTER AND NOW THE DESIRE TO READ DISAPPEARS BECAUSE OF HOW WEAK THE MAIN CHARACTER IS. I am writing through a translator, so there may be some mistakes, this is my subjective opinion.
The stupidest main character I have seen until now, is just an idiot who does not want to take any responsibility at all, he even thinks about suicide so as not to get married, In the end the main character is just a clown.🤡🤡🤡
This novel is pretty shit so far. This is literally the worst MC I've ever seen, he's such a overdramatic little shit. What was the author thinking when he wrote this character. Even if he improves and gets character development, there was no need to make him THAT bad.
Overall, mc is nothing more than a whining, baby bitch. Even worse than rias original character.