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DxD: The Lustful Gamer

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作者: Orael

3.6 (22 評分)

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When I died away as a consequence of making my first poor choice, I did not anticipate being reincarnated in a world inhabited by Yokai, Devils, and Angels as well as Fallen Angels.

I had no idea that I would end up being the "main character" of the story.

I didn't anticipate that my life would turn out to be a game. Despite that, I'm going to try to find the silver lining in this strange circumstance.

There will be 18+ contents.

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HoldMyOsmium

Be careful there author. I noticed you changed the cover to a NSFW one. As much as I apreciate the eye candy, that can get your book deleted. I have seen it happen before.

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Yuri_is_Ntr

Sigh, I think making "gamer" type stories for dxd - is a stupid idea. And let me tell you why. Take this novel for example 60+ chapters and we are still in raynare arc. With he still being relevant for a story. A low level, 2 winged fallen chick. Is still a decent enemy. Okay, sure. Then will be a raiser, which is weak high class devil with annoying abilities. Low class and high class, the difference is pretty tough. If we are talking about numbers in stats. But okay. And next one, kokabiel - ultimate class. You see the problem here? Dxd plot is way too unbalanced. We goes from weak guys to a fire power to bring down the small city, in the span of less then a month. Gamer power on the other hand is time consumimg, and grinding. So you either way bs away how mc deal with a problem, or make him op. At least this author doesn't take away ddraig, to make it somewhat works. You can say that 1 priority of a fic is taking girls and lewds, with grind being just a sidedish. Which is the only way it's could work. But some retardes thinks they could pull a "fair" game experience to a dxd. F degenerates. Dumbest clowns I ever see.

1yr
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Miki_Marlo75

original author ? I already read this story a while ago, I never got very far and it was abandoned at the time of publication or it was removed from the platform.

2yr
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Drigok_Yuri_Is_NTR

The only reason this is 3.4☆ Is because i didn't give any to character design or story development because there is yuri in this. ( which I get annoyed when authors don't put in the tag) The story was great untill the first harem member I kinda realised what was gonna happen and skipped like 7-9 chapters just too see and was disappointed. Should of read r18 first.

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The_Demon_Child

When I read this book, I can only think of one song. Jontron - I won’t play that. Please for the love of John M. Browning, get an editor for repetitions, grammar, and please stop with the cringe dialogue that sounds like an 8th grader wrote a fanfic. I loved the old version of this and this is just a disgrace to its name. I usually never leave reviews but I NEEDED to post this one.

1yr
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Mea_Cu1pa

Soy el señor de la guerra Ghazghkull Mag Uruk Thraka y hablo con la palabra de loz diozez. ¡Soy el profeta del WAAAGH! y mundos enteroz arderán en las huellas de mis botas «. – Ghazghkull Mag Uruk Thraka

2yr
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Vikingo17_YT

I was liking the story even though it was very slow, but I stopped reading it for a simple reason that it doesn't go up in full R+18 in full only half goes up and the full goes up on patreon

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UNCHAINED_PREDATOR

Mid, it's not that bad but the writing is mediocre

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AnimeAmvCaster

It's ok, but some sentences are repeated right after each other, perhaps read it over once before posting? Chapter 29 is once such example and there are many others.

1yr
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White_Fox_1647

people have been trying to get this thing down to a low rating for the stupidest reasons and I do not know why so I'm trying to counter it. you don't need to give something a low rating is because you disagree about one single thing that is stupid

1yr
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CouchPotatoDandy

This fanfic started quite good but turned bad fast. There were many multiple grammar mistakes in it since the beginning, but it was still understandable and readable so I ignore it. But when the author insisted on making many illogical decisions (for instance: for no reason making the MC a devil and therefore vulnerable to light magic) or portraying characters way differently from their initial personality in the Canon, it was kind of getting out of hand for me and I dropped it right there , so read at your own discretion.

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Lacuna_Kimono

Great novel. I enjoyed reading this sometimes the sentences were a little hard to read but otherwise great story. One of the few problems I had was the update schedule and chapter length but it's completely understandable.

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Charlotte_Mage

absolutely great so far and very realistic, like rather than suddenly completely changing your doing it a way the make you look like you have been through something which really will make a person change. just wish there where more chaps lol.

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Jean_Elliot

why don't you make more caps?[img=More pls]

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Lema404
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The author doesn't try to fix mistakes. They repeat sentences in almost every single chapter. update stability is zero due to the author not updating in two months.

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Jason_Debats

would rate higher but turns into a click bate pay for all content at 20.

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B0mbaCl0ck

Piece of trash. Interesting idea, and perfect mommy, but the language used and the writing style are so bad that the story is unreadable. Trash that makes you annoyd just by existing... Clearly some translation of some stolen work, smells chinese.

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Dracoking

is the story over if so please continue with it

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DaoistZECCWz

Your writing is like a translated chinese novel.

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