/ Anime & Comics / DXD: Flames of a pervert
摘要
A man was given Pyrokinetic abilities from Fire Force. Now he must try to survive this horny ass world with only his flames.
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Also English is not my native language, so the grammar will be bad. but, I'm counting on you to critique my work in order for me to improve.
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it's something new I havent read a single fic of someone using benimaru's powers before, Great idea to put it in the dxd world more seems alot more fitting for the type of power he has than other worlds would.loving it so far just wished he put a little more importance on his powers and strength since he doesn't seem to put much attention to it.
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