/ Fantasy / dropped 8
摘要
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Parental Guidance Suggested
-- 推薦票
榜單 
-- 推薦票 你也許也喜歡
4評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
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Loving the story guys. I wouldn't lie, it's one of my best novels and I can't wait for more chapters. Check out the novel 'Demon Lord Reborn' if you want something more about action.
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For those who hesitate to read, just read. The MC is a bit silly at first but bear with the slow character development. Speaking of system, I normally don't like mocking systems. But I can assure you that this system is better than MC. (Pink System) The female characters feel alive and attractive. It's a wholesome novel. There are no events that create negative emotions such as r*pe or NTR.(If you skip the initial event)
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Are you the original author (Roeselaeik)? If not, did you get permission to post this?
Honestly, the title says everything. Kind of mediocre, at best. Barely above trash, at worst. The system hijacking the host’s body is just poor writing, and excuse to put in r*pe/r*pe fantasies. The ONLY good thing about his system, is it’s potential to someday earn points through consensual(his and his partner’s) acts. Until then, it’s just pure trash.
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