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摘要
So this used to be a pokemon fan fic but it was dropped so... Since this account hit max stories and im to lazy to create a new account. Its now a different idea.
After His Uncle Gohan saved the world from King Piccolo. Einstein the Ox Prince began his training under his Uncle. All the while learning the techniques and training the two other disciples that once trained under Gohans master. The Turtle King Krillin and the Wolf Boxer Yamcha both taught Ein what they learned. Eventually Eins realized despite his long journey through martial arts he was alone. He had no rivals, no enemies, at least.... no human ones
So tags may not be completely truthful, I am still debating about writing r-18 chapters for this. Also it might be somewhat edgy according to a second opinion. I'd say it currently chapters 30-50ish are the ones.
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- 寫作品質
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寫檢討
pretty good. I don't know much to say besides it's pretty good. did you know that this fanfic is pretty good. let me reiterate incase you didn't read it well. it's pretty good.
This is good but can you make an auxiliary chapter about how history is different here because it’s weird reading this with the history changed so much.
it is really good as really good story, I thought this was the pokemon fic. this is in my opinion better though. I think the only problem is that it is slow to update and that it replaced a different fic.
Haven’t read this yet but……………………………………..