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Get Bibi Dong and that other woman who he marry in the canon . . ... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
I love how the story is written and about who it is written. I believe this is the first fanfiction I actually read about the Grandmaster. Also, the fact that the author is not throwing himself first head and actually writes a background for the story is also very nice. As such I believe this story is worth 5 stars!
So much potential wasted. everything was great about this novel until mc meets Tang Hao and Ah yin. The novel becomes terrible after that. Cliffhangers and mc helping everyone and their mother
this could have been a epic fan fiction but was let down by focusing the story from "Grandmaster" to his adopted daughter. this story could have been so much better as the mc basically knew the plot line due to his past memories. soo disappointing
I know that I already gave this story a 5-star review, but that was like 3 months ago, as such, I want to say that the author did not disappoint, he actually managed to write a good story flow so far, with all the information we actually need, and it actually makes sense. I also love the fact that the author is not rushing things and doesn't throw women left and right like many fanfictions do, that and the fact that Xiaogang will practically get together with only 2 women ( at least that is what is implied until chapter 80).
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At the beginning it was kind of shaky and I was thinking about not reading it but after continuing I’m really glad I did because your a terrific writer and I’m glad I stuck it out and got to the really good parts of your story. I want to thank you for putting in so much effort to write this story so far a nd look forward to reading more of and when you post your next chapter. Thank you so much.
I have weird feeling of deja vu in this fanfiction like I read this before and I can't tell this fanfic stolen or whatever Before remember where I see this fanfic I can't shit on author so if any douluo dalu lovers see this novel before pls tell me(link or name)
I like the story, especially it's about Douluo Dalu. The storyline is good and not confusing when I read it. The explanation of the origin of the power is also clear 👍👍
The story is top, but do more time skips please More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
Saya harus mengatakan sejauh ini, inilah fanfic Douluo Dalu yang paling kusukai dari puluhan lainnya. Terimakasih kepada Pengarang dan kawan-kawannya untuk menciptakan fanfic ini.
A great story, though not very much, that already not frequent chapters are slightly diluted with "water", but this adds its own zest, just add new chapters more often please (translated by Google translator and some meaning may be strange)
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I am too lazy to think of anything so i'm just gonna say good story ................................................................................................................................
This is actually a top quality read. Seriously first time reading a story with Grandmaster as MC. And finally there is a pairing with Bibi Dong (i haven't seen this pairing before as well). I like how it gives development of the characters and gives world building before the actual canon. Can't wait until he finally meets Bibi Dong and when Tang San is born.! Who knows, maybe Shrek Academy will be as strong as Spirit Hall by then. Keep up the good work, I'll definitely be giving my power stones to you!
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this is great get both bibi dong and liu erlong and don't let her be mean bibi dong be same way as before make her come by mcs side [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]