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"Aria perhaps Death is the only redemption i could have"....
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A boy who became a shadow of his former life was reincarnated in Douluo universe of legend of the dragon king timeline with Legacy of Vergil from Devil may cry and an assistant which was born out of coincidence .This is the his journey to become "The Alpha and The Omega" but unknown to him he isn't the only one who was reincarnated..
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This is my first time writing a novel ,I will try to complete this novel because i always felt uncomfortable when some novels are left for Hiatus. Do give me reviews and suggestion to improve the novel i am not gonna make main character very op from start and he won't become like Vergil from very start.
So, Please bear with it and if you don't like it that way sorry not for you.
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PS:I own nothing besides the storyline and protagonist i guess because Devil may cry own Vergil.
Hope you like the story :)
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A very intriguing concept tbh i can't wait for more chapters and how the author will end this book :D...............................................
hey author it starting to get interesting but i hope you don't kill ren in future because i come to like the two brother . .. .. .. .. .. .. ..
i still need to read, but alredy have spectations feom that sinopses.will be updating the rating while i read
Lol, anyone noticed how the reviews are all 5 stars? Author must be deleting all lower that 5 stars review.. Idea was good writing quality are amateur, which may be offensive but logically accurate. Amateur, generally grammatical errors are present so are spellings and wrong inputted words. Story Development, niche 4 stars still. Characteristics of the Mc and the extras are vague at best, no development at worst If there is, its not noticeable enough for me to identify. Irregular Updates so far 4 stars.World Background, its still the same woth the original work, albeit full of holes haha, gg
this is the best douluo fanfic now and most likely in the future as well, it has exceeded my expectations and so may this story get 5 stars till the end of the story and beyond and author ,best of luck in completing this story.
One of the best!!! douluo fanfictions i have ever read. Continue posting and complete it , do not put it on hiatus....................... .
Hi! Nero here i just finished making some modifications in Vergil's devil trigger. If you guys want a look at that and want it to be improved then reply otherwise i would just upload it when the chapter with first dt will be uploaded
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I HAVENT READ IT BUT, JUST YESTERDAY I THOUGHT OF BEING VERGIL IN DD 3 (I WAS READING DD FANFIC THAT ANPING ONE) I THOUGHT OF REINCARNATING AS TANG WULIN WITH VIRGIL POWERS + THEME SONG WHENEVER I USE HIS POWER
this universe fic is hard you know original author make all of his work in the same universe but in different world and time it also properly have earth like planet as well
Have a good MC, a new and intresting world setting. Characther development is nice. Nothing i want to say, except the chapter isnt long enought, and the update is slow. Hopefully this novel can get update 5 chapter in one week
I have not seen dolulo, but it is a good execution and just for being Vergil I give a 5/5. Vergil is the ultimate daddy -------------------------------------------------------------------
Please do give me suggestions and reviews on the romance chapters. It is my first time writing it. So, i don't know what improvements could be made.
There are some minorities of readers who are complaining about how there are two reincarnated people,Dante and vergil,etc. Have you guys ever heard the term "supporting protagonist". All i can say is that i have the basic timeline of my story in my mind so I won't have any problem completing the fanfic. If some of you guys don't like this fanfic just because there are two reincarnated people then you can stop reading the fanfic.