摘要
Supply the first station of the heavens: Battle through the heavens; contractor: Xiao Yan; devil fruit: burning fruit
Supply the second station of the heavens: the tomb of the god; the contractor: Chen Nan; the devil fruit: the sparkling fruit
Supply the third station of the heavens: Douluo dalu; contractor: Tang San
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This story not my own,i just translated this story from the link below ....
https://m.zhaishuyuan.com/book/29043
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寫檢討
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The story is pretty good and all but there’s 2 things I don’t really like but it’s not affecting me that much 1. The grammar is bad and normally I don’t really care but this is kinda hard to understand 2. The main character is kinda to soft(for me personally)
continue translated, why read in chinese and very bad. mainly because I count on gt. ..., ................................... .......................................... .................................................. .......................................... ..................................... .......................... ...................... ................... ............... ............. ........... .......... ......... ........ ....... ...... .... ... .. .
BRAZIL .................................................................. ................................................................... .................................................................. ....................................................................
So awful to read .. The construction of paragraph is just ok but the sentences are so complicated to read . there are wrong words to comply with what it should present . there are also words that can be explain in simplier words but it is written in deep words . overall, its awful. i cant understand it sometimes
i know this is a chinese novel that i had read before ?? so are you trying to publishe it here in webnovel ???.....just copy and past at most 30 chaps and then let them read it in the original sites so the real author can profite from his hardwork......................