/ Fantasy / Deathworld Commando: Reborn
摘要
What happens when humanity's greatest weapon gets a second chance at life? Commander Kronos wasn't even considered to be a human but rather a weapon to be used for the greater good of his species. He was grown in a tube to be the perfect weapon so he lacked many emotions/experiences most people take for granted. Upon experiencing some emotions for the first time he was quickly eliminated by humanity and was reborn into a world of swords and sorcery, getting a second lease on life.
Of course, he didn't see it that way at the start and thought he was being fooled. It took a near-death experience and a lot of growing up but he finally decided to keep his promise to his former comrades and give his new life an honest try.
Embark on the story of the former Commander of Hades Squad as he settles into his new life as the Dark Elf Kaladin Shadowheart.
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Chapters avg 3-6k+ words.
As of now, I post every Monday morning.
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Have you ever wondered what if Master Chief or Noble Six had to start all-over as a child? In another world. With magic? Yeah. Welcome to Deathworld commando. Join our boy on a wonderful journey to answer age old questions. What are emotions, how do I make friends, is this all a simulation. It gets dark. It gets cute. Mostly we get a protag who is denser Than the heart of a dead star. Read and find out.
I read though this story all the way to the current chapter in two days. It is amazing. Writing Quality - 4.7 stars Stability of Updates - 5 stars Story Development - 5 stars Character Design - 5 stars World Background - 5 stars I read the story on reddit and came here to review it.
With its start out on hfy for me I was hooked. The character development and world building is some of the best I've ever read. to not give this story a read is a disservice to ones own curiosity and dare I say humanity.
First found this wunderbar story over on reddit, nice to see it has spread to webnovel. The beginning sets you with a relatively peaceful outlook on the Commando's recovery from a lifetime of war,, but that doesn't last for long when the twist comes and turns the story upside down. It's a pretty fun read, give it a try.
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One of the best stories I’ve picked up! Consistent update schedules and consistent quality makes it extremely easy to read, especially if you binge all the volumes, and leaves you wanting chapters even sooner. The way the story twists and turns at points leaves you wondering what happens next, and you find yourself on the edge of your seat in anticipation for what will come. For me, even the most mundane and calm chapters leaves me excited to see the next. Be sure to read the author’s notes! Cheers!
I wasn’t there for the beginning but when I started reading I fell in love with it. It is in my top 5 favorite stories of all time, topping most of the books I’ve read.
Phenomenal story with excellent characters placed in a fun world. If I had to pick an issue, and I'm reaching here, it would be that the story inconsistently decides what genre it is. Sometimes it is a slice-of-life story, other times it is high fantasy, and occasionally wants to be a young adult novel. Despite this truthfully small issue, the story is one I'd recommend to any and all.
I mainly read this on r/HFY. It's one of my favorite stories, it even managed to sucker me into reading a genre I normally don't (and liking it to boot!). The world building is good, and doesn't stray away from darker topics like slavery. The characters grow naturally and the relationships between characters seem dynamic and natural. All in all it's a great story, and we shall watch this story's career with great interest.
When someone with the strength to crush your skull with their bare hands and is a walking one man army that gets reincarnated what could go wrong I love this story and am aways up to date, I came here from Reddit.
This story was definitely a hidden gem for me- I always seen this story but I ignore it due to personal bias- that was a mistake and when I finally had the courage to read this story I was 100 percent please on how well done the characters and world thats this story brought to me.
An amazing story with an active community around it and a cool person for an author,what else can ask for?Art? They have that too,not just cover art,character art for several characters that appear in the story,and more is being made.Read it you'l love it.
Generally great quality, good dialogue and 3 dimensional personalities. The author makes an effort to have past events affect future characteristics which improves continuity.
A story from which the first few chapters you can get the idea it will end up being a rug pull but so far it has not happend and with the excellent story and characters so far I doubt we will see that happening. I recommend to anyone that likes isekais or high fantasy.
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I found this story on Reddit and have followed it over to ko-fi cause I needed more chapters. Thank you Rangerfrank for an amazing story and a world that I’ve fallen in love with.
I've been following along with this story on reddit since shortly after it began, the all-around quality started off strong and has only gotten better, and it's up there with the most consistently posted of the dozens of stories I follow (the author takes the occasional break, but we get a heads up well in advance). If you enjoy fantasy that doesn't jump the shark, is willing to delve into dark topics (but not to an exaggerated or uncomfortable degree) and has excellent character and plot progression (the pacing really is superb) then be sure to give this story a chance.
I found this story and was super interested in the futuristic way it was going, then the way the author took the story blew my mind! I've loved this story ever since I read the first chapters can't wait to see where you take it from here!
i hate getting caught up in weekly release anything... books, TV shows, i dont even watch new marvel movies when they release. THIS book is good enough to draw me to it and i wait for the drop with baited breath. the main character doesnt fly through life without a care, doesn't gain some new super power at every obstacle... its a fight, a grind for an old warrior to find peace amidst an unfamiliar world. EXCELENT book that i will probably read ad re-read for many years.
I can easily say that this is a masterpiece, I even feel bad not paying for reading this I just hope more people come to know this story and read it to the end. You may not like some parts of it but it all comes together and creates something great.
THIS BOOK IS PERFECT. It is one of the best reincarnation novels you can find online, with a consistent upload and a wide arrange of characters. The only thing people would complain in this book about is volume 2 The switch is kind of jarring and it gets really gridmark and depress, but it is worth it and is also really important in the future.
How… just… how… The author somehow made the best reincarnation story out there, and it isn’t #1! This is a crime against the human race. All jokes aside, I read this novel in a few days, less so if I didn’t have college. It literally consumed my life up until I caught up. Do yourself a favor and read this thing right now. P.S author: I would so buy this as a physical book series. Hire a(n) artist(s), update the cover art/character art, and profit (if you haven’t already, I’m writing this almost immediately after finishing chapter 122).