/ Fantasy / Deathly hollows in Marvel
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A Marvel and HP fan reincarnates in MCU with the deathly hollows.
What will he do?How will he change the story?
Well that's up to him,isn’t it?
First time writing.Please give your honest opinion.
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寫檢討Its good. Hopefully the Author recovers soon. The Story has potential, although the MC is a bit overpowered for now. I imagine he will have bigger problems with the latter enemies he will fight.
Yeah the story had a ton of potential but well it isnt good at all. The MCs name is cringe and doesnt make sense since he isnt a Dr but a food truck owner.... “Dr. Phoenix” cringe. The story DESPERATELY needs an editor because even the names are wring 95% of the time. The MC in his first meeti g with Natasha has Tony spill the beans and then he does nothing lol guy can literally obliviate all of them but nah just poor writing. COMPLETE WASTE OF TIME.
great story .... amazing consept.... keep it up good luck 🍀🍀👍👍...... ...................................................................
The story is good and so is the concept but the writing is bad, i can understand if english is your second language, but use apps and other things to help you fix it, and you havent updated in four months.
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I’m loving it. 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 ✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️
It hurts my brain that deathly hollows hasn't been corrected to deathly hallowsㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
Great wish it is not dropped but it sure looks like it saddly enough Æiføuøuøføuøjfæjffkjfækfækfæjfkfæjfæfkægkkfægfifiææfjøjfæjfæfjfæjfjæjffigiigkfflxæjæxjægæjfæjfjæfjxæøfjøjdmhurjrkrkrkfk
I really wish you would update more. God I love this story. It's so enjoyable and fun, and the interactions are great. I really loved the concept of combining Harry Potter wizardry with the MCU mystic arts and as such I'm really looking forward to reading more of this. It's a 10/10 for me
Esta muy muy buena y me quedé on ganas de leer más esta novela esperando con hancias los capítulo ,,😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
well I love the MC character in this and he is following the script to the letter with some extras on the side I love the interaction between ancient one and him going on. He is has the knowledge of whole life of albus dumbledore it has to count for something. Friendship between him and Tony that's awesome and many adventures yet to come....😎
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God, I love this story. it is so much enjoyable. please continue it. I haven't seen a story like this. Thank-you Thank You thank you thank you