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摘要
A man gets a perk from Rob and is thrown into the DC UNIVERSE for entertainment read as he conquers his enemies protects his loved ones and shows the world what true strength is. Mc is very prideful
I don't own any DC OR Dragonball characters or anything I only own my OC THE Cover art is also not mine
Updates will be when I want then ( infrequent ) deal with it
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decent idea but chapters r way too short and there's repetition everywhere there's about as much content to comment on as 2-3 chapters from an average story. Conversations don't quite flow right.
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It is good I like dc/dragon ball fanfic. Although the story is good the update must be constant.
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