/ Anime & Comics / DC: I am Venom (Hiatus)
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It's your standard M.O, Someone screwed up causing the death of a young man so they offer him a gift and a chance at reincarnation as compensation.
Will be using DCAMU abit altered
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overall don't recommend this first chapter a gangster is forcing a 3-year-old who can't read who can't write to deliver packages in the city a 3-year-old anybody knows how an actual 3-year-old acts no that is silly to actually expect anything like that no matter what the environment is first grade or kindergarten is around 5 to 6 years old not three this is what 3-year-olds look like
waw the MC is a monster baby that can read and deliver packages at the age of 3 waw the MC is a monster baby that can read and deliver packages at the age of 3 waw the MC is a monster baby that can read and deliver packages at the age of 3 waw the MC is a monster baby that can read and deliver packages at the age of 3
Overall It’s a good fanfic, but if any of you are looking for anti-hero/villian this is not for you because he joins the teen titans…yea so good luck
All these bs ratings would be deleted imo just mad that he was 3 delivering stuff in gotham when there is way kore bs in ff and that he went with the titans sorry that the mc is not ur average emo mc that hates characters that did nothing to him for no reason and is super smart and manipulative dont listen to the hate bs just good criticism i personally enjoy the story keep up the work
I like the story so far, I need to have more chapters to heve a more formed opinions on it. There are some weird things like MC being 3 years old but needing to deliver drugs. It doesn't really impact the story so that's ok.
I am giving this 5 stars but it actually 3 stars level. He has no real motivation. What kid becomes a superhero for a bunch a random schit kids. Who cares about the orphanage . And why does he have morals
Despite some of my criticism I really enjoy this fic, I'm glad that u went for the simple reincarnation route, I just hope u don't let detractors put u down and u can finish the fic if possible, also u can go commercial with the fic on patreon
well the story is good but sometimes i'm confused with the story about why did the author make the main characters life is little bit harder that the gods who is responsible for is reincarnation is a little bit irresponsible of the gods, after sincerity of their mistakes
Most of the Venom related fics have the tag 'harem' on it, I'll give this one a try.
This is a good novel, I hope it doesn't stop halfway, because I really like it and hope this novel will continue, maybe until the end if possible
Has a cool feeling to it but am pretty sure that this out make it pass 20/60 but am going to enjoy well it lasts .............................
Well written as far as grammer goes, however tye m.c is 3 years old and is suppose to be able to read and travel alone to make deliveries? Mind you I have only read the 1st chapter, however we get the cliche m.c is an orphan trope right at the start. Get exposed to some heavy bias as well that is obviously from.the author himself, meaning this is much more an s.i than it seems to be at first glance. The m.c wakes up in an orphanage as well. The entire first chapter feels contrived and defies my sense of disbelief. Gotham is a dangerous city. Sending 3 year old children out on deliveries before they have been to school by a guardian that seems abusive and definitely not teaching them how to read doesn't make any sense at all. Its also mentioned it's a Wayne enterprises orphanage. Depending on the timeline I can't see Bruce Wayne finding an orphanage that embezzles money and abuses children. This is pretty bad and needs rethinking.