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DC - Pocket Hunting Dimension

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作者: Krishna_Is_Here

3.83 (12 評分)

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Cain reincarnated in DC-Verse without knowing why. Just as he was about to despair due to being on the brink of death in an accident, he gained access to Pocket Hunting Dimension.
He now has a choice to make. Either live a regular life and fade into the background, or use the Pocket Hunting Dimension to carve his own legend in this world of DC-Verse.

#DC #YoungJustice

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3.83

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NowGoWithTheFlow

I like the concept of this novel. However you have failed in everything else. First the MC is brain dead hero complex. Why eat the orbs at hospital you should of just waited to be discharge then use the orbs. Second why are you doing stunts out of your window oh.... so everyone can know you have changed an make a target of yourself. Third you should at least have the MC make smart decision an if you can't then make sure MC doesn't make bad decisions.

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Giga_Weeb

MC has a serious problem of pulling undeserved and inexplicable powers out of nowhere while he way too weak. If you're writing a fanfic with the DC universe, use the DC opportunities for that kind of thing. Then the 'mind' inspiration orbs can be used to improve stuff from then on. Also MC wants to plagiarise media from IRL for money which is a red flag for him getting rich without deserving it because he remembers every song and book word for word and note for note guys!

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BrilliantStar

author..is the cultivation system of pocket hunting dimension brought or is just the dimension itself.

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Charlotte_Mage

us there any romance? if yes will their be harem? cause he should be strong enough for one and the various races don't oppose polygamy.

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Profound_deity

I really don’t understand the point of constantly making new fics just to drop them after 10 or so chapters.

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Abayomi_Yusuf

Only 8 chapters to date but this work has amazing potential. I'm really looking forward to the rest of it

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brayan_gonzalez_3523

Me gusta este fanfic, aunque hay algunas cosas un poco cuestionables con respecto a temas de DC y pocket hunting, son cosas que se pueden pasar por alto y pues le dan ese toque de originalidad del autor, se disfruta leyendo este tipo de historias, no lo dejes caer

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the_banana_catfrfr

the idea is good but the execution is horrible not to mention there so many issues with the plot like I get you want to progress the story but the way your doing this is just horrible

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Jose_Nicolas_Mejia

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GeshaKun

Hey, it might not be perfect but it's still good. Probably the only downside is the choices of the MC. Well, you gotta understand though that not all MC's are gonna be perfect. A 8.5/10 IMHO

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Joe_momma

Its a pocket hunting dimension fanfic. I already know it is gonna be peak

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Ayman_Aman_9674

yeeeesssssss f love the idea pls 🥺 🙏 don't drop this I'm rooting for you

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