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摘要
A typical man on his teens who had lived a harsh life dies in the hands of Truck-kun(?) and was transported to a random God who gave him a chance to be reincarnated in another world.
He was given a chance to grant five of his wishes and was reincarnated...in a random(?) anime world where he was a [Spirit] accompanied with some... unnecessary perks like the ability to travel through other worlds albeit randomly and a [Fragment].
And when he landed on his first world, he was not reincarnated as a normal [Spirit] mainly because of that...[Fragment], he was shifted into an [Inverse Spirit]. A being described in that world to be the embodiment of disasters, ruin, and chaos.
How would his endeavors turn out to be in this new life of his?
Would he be even successful on his journey?
Would he even 'fix' himself in the process?
Or would he even travel worlds on the first place?
Who knows, come read and find out.
Disclaimer: I don't own the original works that would be included in this fanfic as such as some of the characters, stories, and arts. They belong to their respective owners.
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Warning: You will read some cringe shît in the early chaps but please bear with it. I promise ya, the later chaps would be worth reading and investing your time on
Chapter Update Release: Yeah bruh... I don't have any stable update time so meh.
This is also my first fan-fic so please go easy on me hehe (≧▽≦)
[Edit: 5/19/22- The beginning two arcs is totally rough. As in, yeah. The story was still in its testing point back then, so it is inevitable... But right now, I think it's worth reading starting at the third arc, the MC is still not the best but is now clearly showing some development. ;)]
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Just a normal 5 star review just like many Authors in this platform do! UmU! Anyways, this would be an extension to the Q&A section part of my other review, be sure to comment down your thoughts guys and thank you very much for reading this novel!
One of the few Date a Live fanfics out there so I gotta give my support . 😀😃 😃😀😃😀
This fanfic is too complicated and the internal drama is killing me, I came to webnovel to have fun reading fanfics, but so many twists and turns and so much drama makes me want to continue, also having Shidou going around the MC bothers me, it's like reading a fanfic from dxd with Issei alive, I don't tolerate 2 MCs in a fanfic it takes the fun out of the plot (Google translator)
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This fic definitely has potential so i will give you my full support author-san. I myself am a harem lover so i hope to see some good romance in this fic and please for the love of every holy beings in existence don't make the mc capture girls like pokemon! I don't care if you put 1000 girls in the harem just give some development in their relationship first.
This fic is actually good because the Mc is not a harem-seeking kind of guy which is kinda "rare" considering almost all the fanfic in ranking is all about harem and some of them are H*ntai world. Also writing quality is good because almost there is no grammatical error. The update is quite f*cked up(in a good way) so I will give it a 4 stars. Character design well.... His background is quite cringed but don't worry it's only half the chapter so all good. anyways that's all for now.
Like I said before, I'll give another review when the fix progresses, so here I am. Writing Quality - 5/5 Grammar's good like what I said in my 1st review. Also, the author writes the POV of other characters and not just the protagonist's which I liked. Story Development - 4/5 I won't go into detail, but I'm liking where it's going after I posted my first review. Character Design - 3/5 Nothing changed. Updating Stability - 3/5 2 chaps a week is alright, I guess. World Background - 3/5 I was expecting a pure DAL story with the MC just going around other universes to go sightseeing or something. What made me rate it lower than my 1st review was the author added FGO elements, which was for me, unnecessary. The MC's going to other worlds anyway, what's the point of adding FGO elements? Could have just made him go to Nasuverse or smth. Overall, the fic's good. Sadly, I'll be ending my journey here. Adding in unnecessary stuff like fgo elements didn't fit well with me. Don't get me wrong, the fate series is one of my favorites, but I expected a pure DAL fic. In the future, I won't even be surprised if you write some bs like 'Since servants in fate are basically spirits turned into familiars, couldn't the MC make spirits like Tohka or Kurumi his servants?' or something like that.
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The idea, the events, everything is good, the problem with the way you narrate the events is boring. I go down a lot and do not read most of the speech because it is boring and I do not feel any progress in words, and even the fights are boring, so whoever has long patience should read it, but whoever is upset about useless dialogues, I do not advise
You know it has been sometime since I did a review for this fic (should be my third one). This had truly gone far since the first time I had seen it. So keep up the good work author-san and pump up the chapters for us readers!😁 Also judging from the lastest chap this might be the calm before the storm type situation because war might break out next chap. So if you're reading this review then I hope you are prepared author-san, because we want our full harem and Shiori. Ps: I just realized that I got second place on your story with a fan value of 90. What's the deal with that?
KURUMI!!!! One of the few DAL novels out there, hope that this is also good as some of your previous novels [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
I have no complaints with this fic, it's 10/10, although I wish it would improve the update time, everything else is a 5 ☆ I hope there will be more "Date a live" fics, since this is one of the best, and hopefully there is a multiverse for "Fate" which would be nice.
Good writing quality as of late. Except for the fact that you often post chapters with broken or uncompleted sentences. Need to fix that. Story Development is going steady so far. Not the best, but still in good standards. Character design... not the best but still bearable. Nothing much really changed and I hope you may work on that next. Updating Stability, 5 chapters a week is decent specially the chapters you are posting is ranging up on 2.5 to 3k words. World background is interesting yet confusing at the same time. I hope you create more chapters which some give depth to this matter since some things are just very confusing at this point. Overall, this novel is still good in my opinion. Though it clearly needs some improvements and adjustments specially on the MC, I can still conclude that this FF is a good read.
I can see that this story has a list of potential and I am confident that the author will use the potential of this Fanfic to its limits and beyond xd. No for real I do hope that the author will continue with this story as i really enjoy reading this Fanfic.
Now this is high quality stuff. The mc is somewhat nuts and a few screws loose but that's expected if life treated you like THAT... Now, this is a hârêm but i cant figure out how mc will even get in a relationship with his personality, he needs to... well, not be a broken person... I look forward to how mc develops further to become better, i dont think he will go into an evil route. Now Kurumi should go nuts about him, she can see the "Time" of people and MC being half god he is literally immortal, so the time Kurumi would get if she manages to "Eat him" would be infinite as well, this should be enough to cause kurumi to go mad about him
Everything to be found in a good fanfiction can be found here even if at times it will look like it’s slow or lagging behind I assure you this fanfiction is worth giving a try to read if you like Date a Live and a fun twist on the story it has potential but we’ll see where it’ll go in the future
I hope dis is good 😊 I can't find a good book now a days and it's my first time seeing a day date a live in webnovel so yeah I really want it Tobe a good book and thanks author for thinking of doing dis book/story...
All in all is pretty much decent and really fun to read. I just read at the wrong time cause it's still on early chapters. Wish that I read this next year. I hope that the Fate part is just Chaldea only. No holy grails
It's great😌, can't wait to see the interaction between MC and other spirit or inverse spirit [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I just woke from a nap and got the urge to do a review for no reason. This should be the 4th one or was it 3th?....I forgot. Anyway, we are now done with the Tohka arc which took so long because you got things to do author-san. The date part of the arc is quite bland because some parts still follows canon, this is freaking "Date" a live. But aside from that, the interesting part for me is that Tohka is changing mentally different from her canon self with touch of yandere (Mio would be proud). I'm curious to see how she would turn out in the later arcs with this change and her interactions with Rei. Rei is also having his character development although slowly but it's there nonetheless. Maybe he can finally evolved into an alpha eroge protagonist after he's done to house more waifus. I'm quite sad that fullharem can't come to be because it would make canon more prominent again. So now, I'm focusing on the chaotic trio (Gudako, Shiori, Mio) and lolis. I ain't backing from those so if you do one of those moves and entrust Yoshino to Shido then I don't know what I'll do author-san.... The chaldea team consisting of Gukdako (chaos incarnate), Mash (I could be wrong about the number) hasn't done anything as of yet but that might change in the next arc. So yeah, I'm done with the review. If you are reading this author-san then remember my warning.....and OUT!
One of the best date a live fanfics I have found. You have my full support hope you keep up the good work. I'm a big fan of Elsword. Nice idea😁👍
Now I would advise you guys who still haven't started reading this novel to read this review. The actual review is in the comments section of this because I can't post a very long detailed review for some reason in WN. As in, it just always say error so it is what it is, I'm the one who would adjust! With that said, kindly read it there~