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Adrian Blake is a 60-year-old retired army vet. He lost his right leg in The Gulf War and unlike others loved his time as a soldier. But what did he get for it? A county that seems to hate his guts. He saved enough to live in his youth to spend his day. He spends it on anime and comics. Until he met her and his blood-filled adventure.
(THIS IS A HAREM NOVEL)
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Rewriting my first ever Fanfic which had many errors in it. I changed all of the mistakes I made at the start and just for the record. This FF is connecte to my main FF. Lightning and Fire Given Form.
Good mc and it describes emotions well it also has a very interesting plot and development even if you dont know alot about dark souls its pretty easy to understand and its a dxd fanfiction where the mc doesn't think with his Ďìçķ
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I feel as if this fanfic was made for me. This is such an amazing dark souls fanfic. Please never drop this.
I love where the story is going and I think it's really good idea. please continue with the fanfiction.
Dark Souls and everything in-between, then mashed up with a bit of DxD at the end, and in the future. Characters are awesome and feel as real as they'll get as written characters. The world background is awesome and connects different genres that work well together, and the story development keeps everything connected and flowing while keeping it entertaining.
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Sheeeeeesh i see you, that Fume Ultra Greatsword looking fire ngl i really should give this a read can’t wait to see what’s in for me. [img=recommend]
a good harem story an evil mc who is surprisingly caring and wholesome,along as there is no ntr or thots in the harem It will be 5 stars from me
A good fic, but I personally know nothing about dark souls so I was confused a good bit lol. Still well written and enjoyable.
5 stars For ds fic. Absolute an amazing work ØjsøyåuøgøuføydhllgslgøysuylylyldoiflzlzkkkfhffpysøhsøhzøhzjødæjdæjdøhsHHØøzlgsyogaototslstatooysoroyspsyøudprøføjdødøhd
Esta historia sigue vigente o ya murió ya que me esta encantando todo esto que has desarrollado✨✨✨✨✨✌✌✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨ y pues era eso y me preguntaba si el mc obtendría algo de juegos como demon souls o elden ring o si entraría en otros mundo de videojuegos fuera de la temática de 40k y los souls
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Congrats on the story! It's a rare story like this! The ones you read and don't want to stop until the next chapter! Very well done the scenarios! You can convey, that you really like, love, the soulslike! different from the works I see around, this one is well formulated, researched! It's really satisfying to read! I'm waiting for new chapters! Have a good day!
Just finished Dark Souls Remastered. saw a video about its lore. now this fanfiction hits different............................................
Other than spelling mistakes that the author always have, it's all good. Honestly the author is pretty good, and his works is awesome, just almost of them are not finished.
All I can say is get past the first chapter and it becomes a good reincarnation/system fic. 😌🤌🏼 Also your taste in armor is exquisite 🤙🏼
Bored out of your mind and just strolling rankings or the Recently Updated section? [img=recommend][img=recommend] STOP what you're doing and go read this fanfic!!