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D’ Punisher

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“you think you can handle a guy like me.” He spoke in an unconcerned tone yet deep and cold. He scoffed and pulled his face closer to hers. “Untouched, I don’t do girls like you. Virgins. I like it hard and rough in bed. And you… You’re nowhere near my league.”
Her eyes locked into his. Fear crawled her body. For a while, she regretted daring him. What would she do now? She needed him and nobody else. There has to be a way.
The side of his lips curved into a dangerous smirk, igniting another ounce of fear in her body. He saw the fear in a lucid plate, resting in her eyes.
With that, he withdrew himself from her and turned his back to leave.
“A coach doesn’t need to be in the field to know he’s a good player.” She spoke, causing his steps to screech to a halt.
She walked towards him and finally meets his breathless face that shone as bright as the moon. She looked into his eyes with so much courage.
“Untouched, you call me. Dislike you say. But I will make you eat a food you’ve never eaten, and even when eaten, you’ll hunger for more. My lips will kiss every part of your body. And you’d crave not just my body, but my soul as well. And I will make you fumble into an unsatisfied desire.” She takes a step closer till their faces were just half an inch apart. “You’ll be the punished. And I’ll be your punisher.”

Being a bodyguard to the most ruthless and heartless boss ever, Asia tries to make him see a different perception about women especially.
She dared to be his punisher though still a virgin. How would she able to deal with everything that will further come her way?

This book is thrilled with betrayals, action, suspense, love, s**X and lust.

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It's a new book and I'm loving it. It's got thrills and Ann's past is 😬. However... A little bit touch up on the tenses in the story. It kinda switches from past to present continuous. That aside, this is a good book with great potential. Well-done, darling author!

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