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Ayden, son of Orchar, was just a Free Man of the Plains, a mercenary selling his sword to anyone who wanted to hire him and his friends. It was meant to be a quest like any other, even though it was based on an absurd legend: finding a dragon's egg.
And when they found it - along with the dragons - who would have predicted such a turn of events? Why had he woken up in an unknown forest? These trees were strange, with long, round green trunks, and he could no longer recognize the sky above him. But most of all, how could these men fly on their swords? Cultivation? Ghouls? Demons?
Ayden was going to have to find answers as he continued on his way through this whole new world. And if he couldn't take his eyes off this surprising cultivator sometimes, well ...
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I'm not the kind to write reviews (shame on me) because all I can say is usually "I like this", but I'll give it a shot ha ha. I can't judge the writing in itself, as English isn't my mother tongue either. But let me shout my love to the characters! Ayden makes me laugh so hard with his sometimes childish behaviour (even if sometimes I would like to slap him xD), but I find him quite endearing, as he's often overwhelmed with his emotions and seems to care a lot about people he likes. On the other side, Lu Yuntu seems mysterious and calm, bringing some balance to the different events. He's rather different than Ayden, but I'm pretty sure I'll like him a lot too. Regarding the story itself, I'm quite curious to discover more of this world and it's background, which seems to have a lot to offers. And of course I can't wait to see what will happen meet to the "redhead demon" :p
For me at least, transmigration to a Chinese-themed isekai is something completely new. Or maybe I've read/seen too many run-of-the-mill anime and manga. In that regards this piece is a refreshing experience. Progression is top-level smooth, actions detailed and thorough. Meticulous so to say. Kudos for thoughtful writing and planning. When a new element is introduced, it's entrance is always carefully, appropriately, and logically prepared beforehand. Very nice. Having said all that, when is the BL stuff coming?
This novel was so intense right from the start, a lot of amazing scenes right from the beginning of this novel, the descriptions were so detailed and imaginative. Each chapter was long and dense, so it took time to read, but it's worthy. This is well written novel with great potential [img=recommend]
REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE I am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean) 😉
Oh God! Why do I always have to fall in love with character in novels?! I'm really tired of it! I love the lead character. Even though I haven't read much, I can already feel it's going to be one great story! Wish you luck in Spirity!!
Ayden's development through this first chapters is sort of interesting, not to mention that the author took his time while describing each and every detail around the story giving me as a reader the hunger of wanting more 👏 Well done Author 👍
Just getting started but so far I'm enjoying it. Looking forward to keep reading. Considering English isn't the author's mother tongue, the English is quite good.
REVIEW Narration: It is well thought out, but at times a bit wordy. I would cut down on a few spots. Though not tooooo much as all of it is solid stuff just a bit much to absorb early on when staring at a screen. Worldbuilding: It is solid stuff you cannot complain about it as I said above the detail in which they describe things is next level. Character development: A bit early to tell, but the character seems believable Story: A bit early, but the foundation is there for a excellent story.
So far, so good, enjoying the story & characters! I'm not a big fan of cultivation novels, but Ayden made up my mind mdr now i wanna follow his journey
I can't really say much about this since it only has 4 chapters but this is pretty good, I love your writing styles and how you describe things. The novel is intense and pretty interesting which made me hooked. And your synopsis is greattt and made me a curious cat!!! Keep writing!
Awesome idea! I loved your book cover! Synopsis is too much interesting! Plot is very well defined! I found a lot of interesting things and also fall for it. I will add this to my library as I couldn't read much for now. Keep it up author! I cheer you!
The title itself already intrigued me, the writing consistency of the author is great! I'm immersed and I read no errors from the author's writing. I can sense that the author really did a great job by polishing the chapters. Readers would be hooked just by reading the prologue. Give this a read!
Good start. Though the author mentioned about about his grammar, the writing quality is better. The only minus is the readability. Instead of using long paragraphs, divinding them will enhance the readability. Other than that this everything else is good!
Man, you did more descriptions than Robert Jordan... I wouldn't say about this much as I already gave my opinion in the comments. I find your words True... and believably enough with a rich imagination. But still try to shorten the descriptions, I can discern how much effort you put into writing those. I can see the intensity that you take this book seriously. I can discern that this book would have a lot of depth.... I'll continue reading it. I read with moderate pace and couldn't find much grammatical errors. I reckon, the author expended a good amount of muscle on that. I'll say again about the Learning Curve, start with as easy as possible. I would recommend the book... it worth a read. yes I'm saying this reading only 3 chapters. Good luck... Author.