/ Fantasy / Crimson purgatory
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His eyes were blurring, he could see his blood dying on the road. The colour was the same as his eyes and hair. " Is this the end, I don't want to die " he muttered full of unwillingness. His consciousness begin to fade, he could feel his end nearing. "This, not your end, this is just the new beginning of your crimson destiny" he heard a very sensual and sweet whisper before everything around his turned crimson.
Join shu Kurenai in his crimson destiny of ruin and passion.
hi this is my first novel so give it a try and share your thoughts if you like then pls support me
I tried to make this well oriented and well explained.
Pls, note I made the mc smart and decisive with good looks, and well enough background as an ordinary human. So that I can focus more on the supernatural side of the world and make him stronger and build not so cliche (cringy) love relationships
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Hi everybody, this is my first time writing so pls give it a try and support me if you like... Don't forget to comment if you have any thoughts and ideas regarding the improvement of the story
excellent novel brilliant world building great characters smart and decisive MC with great power and less plot armors that makes no sense and no more cliches and great relationships with the female leads funny comedy and great adventure with a bit of school life overal a brilliant novel I recommend everyone to read. 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩