摘要
After the nuclear war, the world was controlled by twenty mega-corporations that established a global government. Governed by AI, it judged everything.
Gao Xin, who had only wished to live a peaceful life, inexplicably became a scapegoat for the elite and, unable to pay the imprisonment fee, was sentenced to ten years of exile on Crime Prison Island!
On this island, there were no laws, no constraints, the only order being the numerous game arenas set up by the officials.
The criminals could only participate like racehorses for the entertainment of the elite.
Yet, on this prison island filled with Radiation, cyborgs, and many powerful villains, Gao Xin had no strength, no talent, and no background—like a sheep thrown into a crocodile pool, no different from being on death row.
How could an ordinary person like him survive under the oppression of the strong, the geniuses, and the wicked? Unless in this world, there was a path, a path that allowed even the weakest to continuously break their shackles.
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寫檢討
🛑Warning🛑: Mistranslations, misgendering, misnaming and the usual shebang are all present (though not as terrible as in other novels). Turn off your brains and dive in. You've been warned! This is a rollercoaster. PHEW! The concept of Glass People (normal) and Radiations (modified individuals) is quite interesting. It's basically cultivation without the usual elements in xianxia or wuxia. Kind of nice and different. There are elements of suspense, surprise, dread, horror, terror, etc. MC has quite the brain. His mind works wonders, seriously. Read the free chapters and judge the story yourself!
i know what you're trying to do and it's great that you've got nailed down which basically is good but I would love to know more about your characters and the people around him, Love the slow paced but your action sence has and need to be detailed giving the reader a full view of what you're trying to express, overall good storyline keep up the good work 👍👍
Problem is the writing. The story and translation are okay okay, but the writing shows the author is inexperienced. They are weaving in exposition in dialogue in such a way that makes it hard to believe someone just said that.