/ Teen / Constellations and Harmonies
摘要
They were best of friends once, years ago. Still are, perhaps. But it’s been a while.
Elise Ashton: stubborn yet determined, a brilliant aspiring astrophysicist with her head in the stars. Aiden Carter: caring and friendly, a talented musician who always has his friends and family at heart.
When a twist of fate brings these two longtime childhood friends to vacation destination Silverstone Beach as teenagers, cool-headed logic meets ardent emotions as they struggle to understand each other—and themselves. After all these years, what’s changed…and what’s stayed the same?
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I found the synopsis interesting and read about 6 chapters from the 23 published so far. The childhood friends getting together is a good idea for a story and developing a relationship from there is equally good. Astrophysicist and a musician what a combination. The stability of updates is good and so is the story development. As regards character design that seems good too. The world background has been described OK. Writing quality is also OK. However, I find the chapters seem to be a bit too short. I would suggest that you stick to a minimum of 1050 words. Do not write less than 1000 words. All the best, Author!
Great story of a compelling romance between two childhood friends. The synergy of their relationship is something worth reading about, The way the author worded the scenarios was appealing. I could feel the emotion residing from the characters. A great read and would recommend to any reader. Good job author!
This is just the kind of stories I like! You're doing an amazing job and frankly I'm shocked that it still isn't rated. But anyway, great effort. Can't wait for more.
An amazing concept but too short man. I love these kinds of romance novels especially when the writing is so good as yours. I love the characters and plan on reading more so I hope.you will upload more recently.
Amazingly written! Love the plot, story line, and character designs! Can't wait to read more of this awesome story! Excellent writing from the author!
TBH. Your synopsis already got me hooked up. This is the type of story which I really prefer and I am gonna stay tuned for more updates. When it's come to the description and lines the author is the best. It's enjoyable to read those plots with interesting lines and dialogues.
Your chapters are too short. But so far so good. I'm really into the details so make sure to provide accurate information about the subjects. Overall, it's a good start and I know for sure that you'll improve this novel. 😊
Very good quality. Only a few spots that could be smoothed out. Chapters could be a bit longer, but short is fine. I like the premise ; the author's way of describing things is very beautiful. Keep writing!
This novel is the most amazing novel that I have read so far! I was really looking for a novel that could bring me to the sky just by his words and sentences, but now I had found it! I love the novel! And I'm itching for more chapters! I want more chapters!!!
I'm really excited to see what happens to Elise I think there's gonna be a bit of conflict between the two.but,I rlly good they end up together😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
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Writing quality is so good author. Elisha Ashton's profession is so nice unlike actress or something.. The concept of childhood friends going on a vacation is so good.. Sorry I read only 6 chaps so far but they are really so good.. I would like to finish as early as possible