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an otaku transmigrated as 10 year old yami sukehiro .18 years before the plot.watch how he becomes an op character before the plot . he will have a different persanality than the story.
i do not own black clover . i just wrote this for fun . this is my first time writing.
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I have never read your story, but I will still appreciate your work for making a black clover fanfic, and my advice is better to give "black clover" tag for this story to make it easier searching for
the conversations between people is like robots they talk for efficiency and thats it the characters all seem 1 dimensional the fight scenes are really bad as well and for interaction between characters backstory is almost carbon copy of the script of the original
Not a great story tbh. It's like reading a movie script but a lot worse with terrible grammar and a poor story... So yeah, not something I would read...
About good part of the story is out are you going to keep on writing more of this
Câu chuyện của bạn hay quá nhưng cốt truyện chính đã nhiều chương nhưng bạn vẫn chưa viết tiếp có nhiều người mong đợi câu truyện của bạn lắm đó
This is the first black clover fanfic I have read and I really love it.........I hope you continue with it and don't drop it........... Please don't drop it.
It's a Fantastic fanfic one of the few to have captured the essence of the characters it's in a new league of its own a beautiful well written story and Waiting for the continuation
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THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST BLACK CLOVER FANFIC EVER!!! DEFINITELY LOVE IT!!! IT HAS THE POTENTIAL TO BECOME EVEN GREATER!!! IF U CAN ADD A BIT MORE ROMANCE THEN IT WILL COMPLETE THE STORY!!! NEED MORE PLIZZZ UPDATE!!!
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From what i Have seen so far, the plot is good, but its really hard to read, harder than a lot of translated novels that are not translated well at all.
If your reading this review, please read this novel. It is a very good novel. Read it if you doubt this simple review ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AUTHOR Also, will Yami have a small harem with Charlotte, Dorothy, and Vanessa? GLGLGLGLFLFLFFLFLGLFLFLFLFLFJSHSKSLDJSNSNS
This is one good fanfiction, and it also had a great potential. Keep up the good work. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍
A nice and well written Black Clover fanfiction and the only one I have ever seen with an SI in Yami Sukehiro. It has a lot of potential. Good job author.
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Fun theory do you know that yami might be a reincarnator or transmigrator because do you now where originally live it is the land of the rising sun (for those who dont know land of the rising sun is japan) and another proof for these theory do you not find it strange that is the only katana user in the whole series or he have the only katana in the world of black clover