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Beggar Unlimited

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作者: SisterRuoxie

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Ordinary aged beggar died under the bridge of Love and peace.

Fate is such a prankster, every one of us, at one point in our lives got pranked by the word called fate.

The aged beggar (90+) who was supposed to be dead got awakened at his younger self; in his 18th year in life.

What kind of information can a beggar gather in his entire life?

What kind of future would he lead?
...

He got himself a cat, a special cat.
Contracted cat like in Genius Doctor Black Belly Miss. (A little different. A Cat System but not a system, SYSTEM!)

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CHMN_Of_Magic_Ink

______________________________________________________________________________________________________.I Like fasion books But when mc becomes to entranced in fashion or has a dress he just can't finish for likke 100 chapters it becomes annoying so I reccomend going on like you currently are and if someone puts you down then say F%ck you. And troll them

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Coldfire142

This is a good start but I really want you to stop delaying the next chapter. I love stories that have the main character use knowledge of the future to make his life better than before. The poor to rich story line is also good as long as the main character doesn't get too rich too fast. Fast increase in strength is okay as long as the character doesn't forget to take time to learn control. It would also be okay for the MC to kill rapist, murderers, slavers, and rich assholes who take pleasure in destroying the lives of innocents in brutal and painful ways. Those that molest and brutalize children don't deserve the comfort of death. The MC should make sure to give them fates worse than death that will make readers laugh or feel satisfied.

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