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摘要
The story of a man named 'Luke Aaron' who died being dismembered alive because of finding a secret that can change destinies.
Now, waking up 10 years back in time, Luke tries making a different path than that of his previous timeline, creating and walking on this path with his Inherent Talent and Experiences supporting and backing him to rise above those whom once he can't even reach near feet of.
The Path of Music in the World where warfare is normal among races. The Path with should bring peace now will bring madness, insanity on its way.
Follow the story to see either he will make the path or be crushed again by those who follow their own path.
Note: The first 3 chapters are short but I have maintained the standard limit of 1000 words each chapter after that.
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So far have no complaints except for the first couple chapters being a little short but the author already addressed that in the synopsis. I love seeing music take so many different forms in stories, just like in reality with countless genres
A very interesting and genius premises. Definitely worth trying out. Also Author, I'm sure the you have limitless capabilities to improve. Don't stop reading and writing.
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