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摘要
There is beauty in Chaos and serenity in Order. One cannot exist without the other. Each gives meaning to their counterpart, eternal rivals and eternal lovers.
It’s a shame only a rare few ever come to this revelation. Most live their lives trapped in an illusion, their path to enlightenment forever cut off.
A lie will forever remain a lie, no matter how sweet it is.
I will not turn a blind eye to the truth of the world. It matters not what others think of me, be they family, friends, allies, or enemies.
They may call me a monster, a devil, a lunatic even. But I will not bend. I will not break. I will not be forced into conformity under threat posed by the slave of Order. Because what is Order if not Chaos’ accomplice?
There is only one path worth treading, and I will do whatever it takes to advance forward.
For I am Sǫlmundr, Lord of the Earth.
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Avatar series fanfic.
The first volume will not have anything canon. I apologise in advance. It will be setting up the mcs background and origins.
The power system in the avatar is pretty non-confrontational. You don’t have to fight for resources like in cultivation novels, so the frequency of his evil acts will be pretty spread out. This is a slow burn novel that I hope will draw readers into the world and slowly build up to whatever the climax of each arc is. I can only promise that he will always be a rational, benefits based mc.
This is my first novel so tell me your thoughts or any improvements I can make.
Chapter length: ≈ 2k words
Updates: Once a week
Alt Link: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/51100/avatar-jorsaga
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I heard you said that this would get better after ten chapters. I have endured pain and torture for days. After completing 11 chapters, I do not find it good in any way. I find it very trash. In my culture, we call these kinds of people (that give false hope for clickbaits) 'faaroode' which roughly translates to stinky pig that eats 💩
It is a tad to slow for my tastes and is very confusing in the beginning. What I have gathered so far is that the mc is in a Viking village as a potential earth bender from avatar. I did not read too far to see if he was in the world of avatar with Vikings added in (for some weird reason…) or was a Viking ff mixed with avatar bending and animals, but I read until chapter six. . . And I feel like you are explaining a bunch of unimportant details when I just really want to get to the action and the progression of the story. You are too descriptive of the areas and what they are used for and there is little dialogue/inner monologue. Which is very boring to read though since it will have little or no importance to your story. I did like the start all the way up to him being taken by the wetnurse? Then it just turned into a typical wuxia novel from there.
It's got a great start! I'm looking forward to how you continue this! I'll update my review as more chapters are posted, so that I can give a more complete review, but for now, I'm hooked enough to add it to my reading list!
I can only encourage you, now I do not see any evil in the novel, and not Hamas, but I have no expectations towards you through your comments I hope to produce a personal evil smart, the audit will change in the future
First of many of the reviews are way too harsh. You can't just rate a book as 1 star just because you don't like it, you should keep your feelings aside and judge it from an objective point of view. The reader's feedback is very important to the author. Even if for a moment I suppose that everything is truly 1 star it won't make sense for the stability of updates. The author has clearly mentioned in the synopsis that the update schedule is 1 chapter per week and I have been following him from the start and he has stayed true to his word. So it should at least be 5 stars in the stability. Another thing I find irritating is that most of the complaints are petty ones like "change the names". The book has a Viking theme and the Norse names just breathe life into it. One suggestion I can give is : write the names somewhere along with a few key traits and if you find that to to be 'too troublesome' than you should have found writing a review to be 'too troublesome' too. Some people claim that the author uses 'fancy words'. All I can say is that this is not for you my friend but I most certainly like the the author's writing style. Summary: To sum it up the book is good. I understand if it is not your cup of tea but you cannot ascertain that without even giving it a chance. Go at least give it a try. My rating: 4 stars Webnovel rating: 5 stars(To balance the negative reviews) I will edit this review again in the future.
Esto pasa cuando quieres escribir una historia original en un mundo ya trasado estaba interesante aunque el primer capítulo y segundo me decepcionó mucho de su forma pero después te recuerdo que le pusieron tag de villano y se me pasa también está el tema que parece que el autor quería crear una historia bastante larga 300 o más capítulos x lo que parece muy muy lento no veo mucho potencial en la historia y no me extrañaría que tenga bloqueos de escritor cada 50 capítulos y muchos agujeros de la trama TAMPOCO me estrañaria que dejara caer la historia 😶
Really a good story, I hope this fanfic gets more Recognition. The story is solid, the main character is cunning and intelligent.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
People are a little incincere about this fanfic. The story has a gradual pace, allowing for a nice flow. I’d say after the twelfth chapter or so is when things become worthwhile. It’s a safe read despite the lack of updates.
The names threw me off at the beginning and then I see the mc as a little light and then becomes able to control Chi as a baby...... So many plot holes and things that don't make sense... However looking at the potential of this novel, I believe that you can still make a comeback but first please edit everything and change their names please.