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Before Ryo Carter arrived, the strongest soldier in the regiment was Captain Levi. But after Ryo joined, everyone began to speak of a new name—the strongest recruit, Ryo Carter!
Levi: "Ryo is the most impressive newcomer I’ve ever seen. I believe the Survey Corps needs him."
Erwin: "I agree. He has great potential."
Ryo: "The Survey Corps? No way. I’ve heard the life there is miserable—no proper shelter, barely any food. I think I’d prefer the Garrison Regiment. At least they have a better setup."
System: Ding! System notification: Join the Survey Corps and receive a growth reward package!
Ryo: "Wait... Captain Erwin, you mentioned something about rewards for joining the Survey Corps? Is that true? Well then, count me in!"
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you said the MC is a recarnactor. but he's acting like he hasn't even watch the anime, how can he not know that Krista is faking it or she is from a royal blood.or that Annie is a female Titan. author I think you should go and watch it before writing a fanfic
I give it a low rating only because of the misleading synopsis. Rjrjururugruj3u3urytyru3u3ururururu4i3iririrkrkk3kekeejjejrjrjfugugirurururuturyryyryryry4y4y4yryryryryeyryryurruutjtktktrkrlkkkrkekrjrjrjj
I like the setting of this story and the grammar is good. but the story itself is confusing, chapters repeat themselves in slightly different words. And sometimes they contradict what the last chapter has written. if the story was one cohesive line it would be 3 stars. ( chapters repeat themselves, the system rewards change from chapter to chapter. His interactions are weird, sometimes it feels like they know each other, and the next they introduce themselves to him. and one time they are having a race and half a chapter later it is a duel all of the sudden.) if the author fleshed out the characters a bit more it would be 4 stars (the main character is confusing, and we don't really get a good grip on his character and why he thinks certa in ways. he just does shit at random) and it would be 5 stars if the interactions would be a bit deeper. (like erin and his gang just randomly interact with him like friends, while in the story he has maybe talked to him 2 times.)
Author san try to remove some of the Chinese parts, and also make it more human-like. overall the story is good and has potential. Just keep up the good work and read some of the books which are slices of life.
5 STAR No doubt loved all of your works and thanks for writing an Aot fanfic as there are literally none like I have read many of them they just ditch in middle I really hope you will not drop this
I love the flow with the book so far.Wish it would post more, but other than that. It's a great book keep going
A.O.T Got a solid Story every little details is connected to each so seeing a fanfiction about this masterpiece I kinda do n'twanna read due lack of creativity especially if the story got SYSTEM 😒 welf ganna read it later
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Estás haciendo un buen trabajo me gusta que el protagonista sea op solo espero que no hagas a los enemigos súper op porque entonces no tendría mucho sentido hacerlo op además por favor no hagas que vuele tipo Superman le quitaría la gracia por supuesto este es tu fic solo son recomendaciones
the writing quality is fine, but if you're going to do the same ending as the anime, tell me, let's not bother reading at all, the attack on a titan has already brought a lot of frustration
Its great to see a AoT fanfic since there’s rarely any aroun. Overall its a good Fic. A lil longer chapters would be nice as well im hoping to see some character development over time as the story goes. You might think that this fic its not doing good enough but what matter the most is time. Youll see some progress as more chapter are uploaded.